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Hereditary
A grieving miniaturist builds dollhouse replicas of her own home while an unseen presence rearranges her family inside it, until the house's safest rooms turn lethal.
> Every door in this house was already locked from outside.
> The grandmother got exactly what she wanted.
> Mother knows. Mother built it. Mother is in the walls.
Synopsis
The Graham family lives in a rustic craftsman house so isolated and exact that it matches a miniature on Annie's workbench. Annie, a miniaturist racing a gallery deadline, has just buried her secretive mother, Ellen Leigh. Her psychiatrist husband Steve holds the household steady; their teenage son Peter drifts through weed and a crush, while withdrawn 14-year-old Charlie clicks her tongue, builds manikins from found objects, and collects things she shouldn't. A sudden, devastating loss splits the family open, and Annie's grief curdles into something stranger: footprints appear in empty rooms, a paint bottle tips itself, and her dead mother stands smiling in dark corners. A warm older woman named Joan, met at a grief group, offers Annie a way to reach across the divide between the living and the dead. What begins as comfort becomes a doorway. As the haunting moves from the workshop into the bedrooms, Annie discovers her mother left behind more than embroidery and locked doors, and the spatial rules of her own home start working against the people inside it. The deeper she digs, the clearer it becomes that someone planned this generations ago.
Themes
Inherited trauma and predetermined fate
The classroom lesson on Greek tragedy under a chalkboard reading "Escaping Fate" (scene 13) states the rule the whole film obeys: the Grahams aren't choosing their doom, they inherited it. Symbols Annie treats as pre-existing, like the triangle carved into her mother's floorboards, were waiting for her before the story began.
Grief, guilt and blame within a family
The film's engine is who is at fault. The dinner-table eruption (scene 90) detonates the family's blame outright, and the word "blamed" closes Annie's confession at the grief group (scene 22) — guilt passed hand to hand like an heirloom.
Loss of control and the illusion of agency
Annie sculpts her own catastrophes in miniature, reproducing her anxiety at doll scale while a real presence tips her paint and rearranges her figurines. Steve's insistence that the family controls nothing becomes the film's grim thesis once the house itself starts making the decisions.
Maternal ambivalence and the failure to protect
Annie forcing Charlie to the party against the girl's wishes is the choice she spends the film unable to forgive, and her buried admission about never wanting to be a mother surfaces as the haunting closes in.
Occult manipulation and ritual sacrifice
Joan's gentle "JOANIE" welcome mat (scene 84) and her seance are a trap dressed as kindness; the warmth is the lure, the ritual the point.
Scope at a Glance
approx. 14-18 meaningful moves across 15 locations, heavily anchored to the Graham house
The real pressure is the haunted house itself — 100 scenes anchored to a single multi-room build that must hold practical fire, ceiling-rig wirework, an escalating fly-and-ant infestation, decapitation and corpse prosthetics, two child-adjacent teen performers, a trained bird, and a snowbound exterior with a treehouse set.
Atmosphere
This is a film that opens by lying to you about what it is. The camera glides across a craftsman's workbench of handmade dollhouses until a miniature teenage bedroom dissolves, seamlessly, into the real room where Peter sleeps, and from that first cut the rule of the whole movie is set: there is no safe distance, no outside vantage from which to watch. You are inside the dollhouse. The Graham house is rustic, two-story, snowbound, isolated, and identical to the model on Annie's table, which means the wide shot of the real home and the close-up of the carved figurine carry exactly the same temperature. The light is cold and even, household and clinical, the kind of daylight that flattens grief into chore. Rooms are tidy. The dread does not come from shadow. It comes from order, from a triangle violently carved into the floorboards of the grandmother's stripped room that Annie treats as if it had always been there. The pace is deliberate and downward. Scenes hold past the point of comfort, then hold longer. A funeral whippoorwill flaps out of the rafters and fixes its gaze on Annie mid-eulogy while, below, an old woman covertly streaks oil across the corpse's lips, and the film simply lets both things be true without flinching toward explanation. The structural shock of the picture, the highway, arrives without score and without mercy: Peter swerves around a deer carcass at eighty, Charlie's head goes out the window for air, and a telephone pole takes it clean off. He does not look back. He turns the mirror away and drives home with the body. The morning after, Annie's cheerful goodbye in the driveway curdles into a single offscreen scream, and the film never recovers its breath, nor wants to. What a viewer carries out a week later is not a jump but a feeling of being arranged. The poltergeist beats are quiet and tactile: a paint bottle tips itself over near Annie's hand, a candle re-lights, an upturned glass slides across the dining table while Annie's voice goes out of her and Charlie's comes back, blind and accusing. The horror is administrative. Someone built this. The miniatures keep editing themselves to match a fate already decided, until Steve finds a headless figurine in Peter's clothes and a bloodied Annie kneeling in the model attic, prophecy delivered in balsa and paint. The Greek-tragedy lesson under a chalkboard reading Escaping Fate is not a wink; it is the operating instruction. Annie's confession circle revolves around one held word, blamed. Steve's whole worldview collapses into one flat sentence about having no control over anything, the ceiling could fall and who would they blame. Hold these images and you have the film: a sigil necklace fingered compulsively in a parked car, a shoebox of decomposing animal heads buzzing with flies in a freezing treehouse, ants crawling over a severed head on a roadside, a Post-it that just says KEEP WORKING above unfinished miniatures, a single window glowing in a moonlit house that looks exactly like a model of itself. The last shot is the first shot's promise kept: the real house composited down into its own dollhouse, the camera finally allowed outside, far too late.
Tonal Descriptors
Reference Points
the unflinching frontal stare at the off-kilter and the grieving, faces held too long until ordinary people look like specimens.
a domestic interior rebuilt as a trap, rooms that look normal but are secretly engineered, for the house-as-mechanism feeling.
centered, doll-eye compositions and slow gliding moves that make a home feel like a model someone is looking down into.
the family as the site of devouring inheritance, parental love and annihilation in one image, for the maternal-horror register.
real handmade dollhouse detail at macro scale, so the dissolves between model and world are seamless and the tactility is genuine, never CGI-smooth.
even, sourceless, unglamorous interior light that denies the audience the relief of expressive shadow.
Music & Sound
The score should refuse melody almost entirely. This is a film of room tone and infestation, and its sonic identity is dissonant texture rather than theme: held strings that never resolve, low brass swells that read as pressure rather than music, and long stretches where the most important sound is a fly. The buzzing is structural. It escalates across the picture as the hidden attic corpse decays, from a single insect on Annie's face to a horde released when she pulls the hatch rope, and the sound team should treat that infestation as a slow crescendo the audience registers before the characters do. Against that, Charlie's tongue-click is the film's leitmotif, a small dry tic that migrates from a living girl to an empty back seat at a red light to the corner of Peter's dark bedroom, each repetition colder than the last. Let silence carry the catastrophe. The highway decapitation should play with almost nothing scored, only road noise, the swerve, the impact, the door-alarm dinging as the car idles into the driveway with Peter walking stiffly inside. Save the swells for the supernatural set-pieces: the dining-table seance where Annie cries out in Charlie's voice, blind, "Why are you scaring me?!" before Steve breaks the trance with a glass of water; the climactic combustion where the only musical idea allowed is faint, repetitive, war-drum percussion thumping from the unseen drum circle in the woods. That subdued drumming is the cult's sound, and it should arrive like a heartbeat the house cannot stop. Elsewhere, give weight to physical objects: the scratch of a pencil drawing itself down the hall, the clang of snapped piano wire, the flat reality of a paint bottle tipping over with no hand near it. Where music does score, keep it acoustic, abraded, and unresolved, never gothic-organ camp. The funeral organ is the one diegetic cue, and it should sound ordinary, a real chapel, which makes the lip-oiling ritual underneath it more obscene. The closing coronation, worshippers crying out the single word "Hail!", wants ritual percussion and the human voice, no synthetic sweetening.
Soundtrack References
for the abrasive, sawing string clusters that function as dread-pressure rather than melody, scoring inevitability instead of emotion.
for the queasy, detuned strings and inhuman textures that make a quiet room feel predatory.
for the bowed nyckelharpa, atonal choral shrieks, and folk-occult restraint that build a ritual world without a single comforting note.
for the buried, processed drones and sudden ritual-percussion stings that weaponize household quiet.
Color Palette
the flat, even household light of the workshop and the funeral chapel, where grief is lit like a chore and nothing hides in shadow.
the muted blue-grey of the snowbound Graham house and the woods where Charlie sleepwalks coatless toward a ring of torches.
the warm wood and paint of the dollhouse miniatures and the treehouse, the craftsman's tone that turns sinister once the models start editing themselves.
the amber of the two heaters glowing in the treehouse and the black-candle flame of the seances, the only warmth and never a safe one.
the dry blood of the Sigil painted on the attic ceiling, the red cloaks of the worshippers, and Steve igniting into a screaming ball of flame.
Similar Moods
the same slow-tightening folk-occult dread, a family destroyed from inside by an inheritance it half-invited, set against cold rural isolation.
the polite, smiling conspiracy of older neighbors closing around a vulnerable person, horror delivered as warmth and tea.
grief as the engine of the supernatural, a couple unraveling after a child's death while the camera withholds and rhymes images toward a fated end.
the chilly, methodical sense of a predetermined outcome, dread that comes from order and inevitability rather than shock.
Scenes
WORKSHOP
uncanny calmThe camera glides across meticulous handmade dollhouses until a miniature teenage bedroom dissolves into the real room where Peter sleeps, the model and the world becoming indistinguishable.
- Characters
- STEVE; PETER
- Props
- dollhouses; miniature craftsman home; black suit and tie
- Wardrobe
- Steve in a black suit
- VFX/Stunts
- Seamless miniature-to-live-action transition
- Notes
- Opening shot establishes the dollhouse motif; the house seen is identical to a miniature. Max the dog introduced.
- Camera
- Slow lateral dolly across the miniatures, pushing in until model dissolves into the real room
- Lighting
- Soft cool morning light, single window source, flat and even
- Mood
- Uncanny calm
GRAHAM HOUSE - SAME TIME
grief-numbedA wide reveals the snow-blanketed house identical to the miniature, the camera booming down past a looming treehouse to find Annie hollowed out in the parked car.
- Characters
- STEVE; ANNIE
- Props
- sigil necklace; family car
- Wardrobe
- Annie in all black; Annie wearing a delicate necklace bearing an ornate sigil
- Notes
- House revealed identical to the opening miniature. Treehouse introduced fifteen feet up an oak. Annie compulsively fingers the sigil necklace.
- Camera
- High wide crane booming down past the treehouse to settle on the car
- Lighting
- Flat overcast daylight, snow-bounced and shadowless
- Mood
- Grief-numbed
TREEHOUSE - SAME TIME
concealmentSteve finds Charlie asleep on the freezing treehouse floor, who lunges to snap shut a secret shoebox the instant she wakes.
- Characters
- STEVE; CHARLIE
- Props
- drawing pad; shoebox
- Wardrobe
- Charlie in a parka and pajama bottoms
- Notes
- Charlie's protective secrecy over the shoebox planted early.
- Camera
- Medium two-shot, low angle from the hatch toward the girl
- Lighting
- Cold raking daylight through plank gaps
- Mood
- Concealment
FUNERAL HOME - CHAPEL
unsettled mourningA whippoorwill flaps out of the rafters and fixes its gaze on Annie mid-eulogy, while below an old woman covertly streaks oil across the corpse's lips.
- Characters
- ANNIE; STEVE; CHARLIE; PETER; LARGE WOMAN; MIDDLE-AGED BLONDE MAN
- Props
- open casket; blown-up photo of Ellen Leigh; eulogy loose-leaf page; sigil necklace on corpse; drawing pad; bottle of oil
- Wardrobe
- Charlie in an oversized black dress over her pajama bottoms; Ellen's corpse wearing a necklace with a delicate sigil ornament
- VFX/Stunts
- Trained whippoorwill flying into chapel
- Notes
- Ellen Leigh's funeral. The smiling blonde man (later a Paimon cultist) stares at Charlie. The lip-oiling ritual is the first occult clue. Charlie's tongue-click tic established.
- Camera
- Wide chapel master with the bird's eyeline cutting down to Annie
- Lighting
- Dim amber chapel light, warm pools over the casket
- Mood
- Unsettled mourning
CAR (MOVING) - LATE AFTERNOON
uneasy returnDriving past a gathering of deer, Annie confesses the funeral-home bird felt like her mother while Charlie tenses and clicks her tongue over a chocolate bar.
- Characters
- STEVE; ANNIE; PETER; CHARLIE
- Props
- chocolate bar
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Nut-allergy setup with the chocolate bar. Peter's resentment of Annie shown. Deer motif begins.
- Camera
- Tight interior coverage, over-shoulder favoring the mother, deer visible past the glass
- Lighting
- Fading blue dusk through windows, low warm dash fill
- Mood
- Uneasy return
GRAHAM HOUSE - FOYER
intrusionThe family enters a dark, seemingly vacant house to the sound of scurrying feet, and Steve notices mysterious dried footprints across the foyer.
- Characters
- STEVE; ANNIE; PETER; CHARLIE
- Props
- boots
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Off-screen scurrying feet and unexplained footprints suggest an unseen presence in the house.
- Camera
- Wide foyer shot, low angle following the footprint trail away from the family
- Lighting
- Low ambient dusk, single warm spill from the open door
- Mood
- Intrusion
WORKSHOP
domestic strainAnnie paints a doctor figurine into a miniature hospice tableau of her dying mother while Steve quietly sets a pill beside her, which she downs without a word.
- Characters
- ANNIE; STEVE
- Props
- miniature hospice; small doctor figurine; magnifying eye-glasses; pill; glass of water; laptop; exhibition poster PDF; moving boxes marked Mom's Things
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Gallery exhibition deadline established (six and a half months). 'Mom's Things' boxes introduced. Annie's medicated routine shown.
- Camera
- Close over-shoulder on the miniature, husband entering soft in background
- Lighting
- Tight warm work-lamp pool, surrounding dimness
- Mood
- Domestic strain
PETER'S BEDROOM
wary distanceAfter tender goodnights, the loaded tension between Annie and Peter lingers, and once she's gone Peter climbs out to lock his door.
- Characters
- PETER; STEVE; ANNIE
- Props
- guitar; muted TV; paintbrush; miniature prop
- Wardrobe
- Annie wearing magnifying eye-glasses
- Notes
- Mother-son tension; Peter locks his door.
- Camera
- Static medium, doorway in deep focus, boy foreground
- Lighting
- Cool TV flicker and weak lamp, deep shadow
- Mood
- Wary distance
CHARLIE'S BEDROOM
maternal dreadAmong Charlie's handmade manikins, Annie spots a word like 'Satony' carved into the wall behind the bed as Charlie asks who will take care of her when Annie dies.
- Characters
- ANNIE; CHARLIE
- Props
- handmade human manikins; small statues; drawing pad; casket caricature drawing
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Carved word 'Satony' planted (later a Paimon invocation). Charlie says grandma wanted her to be a boy. Charlie's fear of abandonment.
- Camera
- Medium two-shot on the bed, carved wall just over Annie's shoulder
- Lighting
- Single warm bedside lamp, heavy surrounding shadow
- Mood
- Maternal dread
WORKSHOP
apparitionAnnie flicks off the light and freezes as her dead mother stands smiling motionless in a dark corner, vanishing the instant the light snaps back on.
- Characters
- ANNIE; ELLEN
- Props
- box of bottled oils and herbs; Memories photo album; Notes on Spiritualism hardback; miniature of Annie breastfeeding
- Wardrobe
- Ellen wearing the same outfit as the funeral
- VFX/Stunts
- Apparition appearance and disappearance of Ellen
- Notes
- First clear apparition of Ellen. The breastfeeding-rivalry miniature foreshadows the grandmother's claim on the children.
- Camera
- Wide static, deep corner held in shadow, mother small in foreground
- Lighting
- Near-black, faint hallway spill, apparition self-pale
- Mood
- Apparition
ANNIE & STEVE'S BEDROOM - MINUTES LATER
withheld fearAnnie nearly tells Steve she scared herself in the workshop, then swallows it and turns off the lamp into a held, lingering kiss.
- Characters
- ANNIE; STEVE
- Props
- bedside lamp
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Annie keeps the apparition secret from Steve.
- Camera
- Tight two-shot on the pillow, lamp at frame edge
- Lighting
- Warm bedside lamp fading to moonlit blue
- Mood
- Withheld fear
HIGH SCHOOL CLASSROOM - NEXT MORNING
morbid fixationA pigeon slams into the classroom window and snaps its neck, and amid the children's excitement Charlie's eyes coldly fix on the scissors on the teacher's desk.
- Characters
- CHARLIE; TEACHER
- Props
- upside-down quiz; small manikin made of found objects; scissors
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Pigeon striking window and breaking its neck
- Notes
- Charlie's special-needs class. Pigeon death and the scissors she will steal set up the next decapitation motif.
- Camera
- Over-shoulder past the girl toward the teacher's desk and scissors
- Lighting
- Flat overhead fluorescent, cool and even
- Mood
- Morbid fixation
HIGH SCHOOL CLASSROOM
thematic foreshadowUnder a chalkboard reading 'Escaping Fate,' Mr. Davies argues that the oracle left Heracles no choice, while Peter, oblivious, stares longingly at Bridget.
- Characters
- MR. DAVIES; PETER; BRIDGET; SMART-ASS STUDENT; STUDENT #2; STUDENT #3
- Props
- copy of The Women of Trachis; smartphone
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Greek-tragedy classroom lesson on inevitability and lack of agency directly mirrors the film's fatalism. Bridget introduced as Peter's crush.
- Camera
- Wide classroom, slow push toward Peter's eyeline to Bridget
- Lighting
- Soft window daylight, warm and naturalistic
- Mood
- Thematic foreshadow
SCHOOLYARD
ritual instinctCharlie calmly snips off the dead pigeon's head with the stolen scissors, pockets it, then locks eyes with a sentimental old woman watching from beyond the fence.
- Characters
- CHARLIE; PETER; OLDER WOMAN
- Props
- dead pigeon; scissors; chocolate bar
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Pigeon decapitation
- Notes
- Charlie begins collecting severed heads. A watching old woman (cult member) gazes at her. Peter's 'No nuts, Charlie' refrain.
- Camera
- Low medium on the girl, watching woman soft in deep background past the fence
- Lighting
- Flat cold daylight, overcast
- Mood
- Ritual instinct
PSYCHIATRIST'S OFFICE
contained frustrationSteve absorbs an agitated patient's circular despair with superhuman, stifled patience in his sparse leather-chaired office.
- Characters
- STEVE; PATIENT
- Props
- notepad; leather chair
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Establishes Steve as a working psychiatrist.
- Camera
- Static wide two-shot, symmetrical across the office
- Lighting
- Soft natural afternoon light, low contrast
- Mood
- Contained frustration
ANNIE'S WORKSHOP
creeping obsessionAnnie paints a tiny laptop displaying 'Discernment of Presumed Apparitions' inside her miniature, art and obsession folding into one another.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- laptop; miniature laptop; Graham house model
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Annie researches apparitions and reproduces her own anxiety in miniature.
- Camera
- Macro on the miniature laptop, artist soft behind
- Lighting
- Soft directional daylight on the model
- Mood
- Creeping obsession
ANNIE'S MOTHER'S BEDROOM
encroaching wrongnessAnnie freezes in the doorway of her mother's stripped room, eyeing a large triangle violently carved into the floorboards.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- stripped bed; bookshelf; framed family photos; carved triangle in floorboards
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- The carved triangle (pointing northwest) is a recurring Paimon symbol. Annie treats it as pre-existing.
- Camera
- Wide from the doorway, triangle on the floor in lower frame
- Lighting
- Cold flat window daylight, dust-hazed
- Mood
- Encroaching wrongness
TV ROOM - MOMENTS LATER
suspicionAnnie interrogates the family about who opened the grandmother's room, and Peter coldly insists she'll never find him in there.
- Characters
- STEVE; ANNIE; PETER; CHARLIE
- Props
- TV; coat
- Wardrobe
- Steve still wearing his coat
- Notes
- Nobody admits opening the locked room, deepening the sense of unseen intrusion.
- Camera
- Medium wide, mother standing over the seated group
- Lighting
- Warm lamp plus cool TV flicker
- Mood
- Suspicion
HALLWAY
secret-keepingSteve locks the grandmother's door by key as a cemetery call about a 'desecrated' grave forces him to lie, and Annie pulls on a coat to flee the house.
- Characters
- STEVE; ANNIE; PETER
- Props
- door key; phone; coat
- Wardrobe
- Annie wearing a coat
- Notes
- Cemetery reports the grave desecrated a week after burial; Steve hides it. Annie's cover story of 'going to a movie' begins.
- Camera
- Medium on the father at the door, wife pulling on coat behind
- Lighting
- Low warm hallway sconce, deep shadow
- Mood
- Secret-keeping
TREEHOUSE
hidden compulsionCharlie lays the fresh pigeon head into a shoebox already holding three other decomposing animal heads, flies buzzing in the cold.
- Characters
- CHARLIE; ANNIE
- Props
- shoebox; severed pigeon head; severed rabbit head; severed rat head; severed squirrel head
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Severed animal heads in decay with practical flies
- Notes
- Reveals Charlie's collection of severed heads (later assembled into the cult diorama).
- Camera
- High angle looking down into the shoebox over the girl's hands
- Lighting
- Cold failing dusk through plank gaps
- Mood
- Hidden compulsion
CAR (MOVING)
dread of disclosureAnnie idles into a Catholic-school lot, kills the engine, and braces herself in silence before facing the grief group.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- family car
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Annie's secret destination is the grief support group, not a movie.
- Camera
- Static interior profile, lot lights beyond the glass
- Lighting
- Cold blue night with a distant sodium spill
- Mood
- Dread of disclosure
CATHOLIC SCHOOL GYMNASIUM
raw confessionForced to speak in the circle of chairs, Annie unspools her family's history of suicide and mental illness, ending on the haunting word 'blamed.'
- Characters
- ANNIE; LEADER; YOUNG MAN; MEXICAN WOMAN
- Props
- easel sign reading Losing A Loved One; circle of chairs
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Crucial exposition: father starved himself, brother hanged himself in mom's bedroom blaming her for 'putting people inside him,' Annie's mother had D.I.D. Annie hints at her sleepwalking incident.
- Camera
- Slow push into the circle toward Annie, chairs ringing the frame
- Lighting
- Flat cold gymnasium fluorescent
- Mood
- Raw confession
HALLWAY
estrangementA depleted Annie crests the stairs just as Peter's door eases quietly shut in the foreground.
- Characters
- ANNIE; PETER
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Brief transitional beat of mother and son avoiding each other.
- Camera
- Deep-focus hallway, closing door foreground, mother distant
- Lighting
- Low blue night, thin warm light leak from the door
- Mood
- Estrangement
PETER'S BEDROOM - SAME TIME
teenage longingPeter scrolls Bridget's Facebook photos behind a 'Popular Career Interests' tab, then takes a pipe hit at the window as a party invite text lands.
- Characters
- PETER
- Props
- laptop; water pipe; marijuana; smartphone
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Party at Aaron's house set up via Brendan's text. Peter's weed established.
- Camera
- Medium over-shoulder on the laptop, window beyond
- Lighting
- Cold screen-blue, faint warm window spill
- Mood
- Teenage longing
GRAHAM HOUSE
watchedA wide of the house with an anonymous shoulder in the foreground as pot smoke and a cough drift from Peter's window.
- Characters
- PETER
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- The foreground shoulder implies an unseen watcher observing the house.
- Camera
- Wide static, anonymous shoulder hard foreground left, house beyond
- Lighting
- Cold moonlit blue, single warm window
- Mood
- Watched
CHARLIE'S BEDROOM - THE NEXT DAY
summonedA sudden glint of light sweeps Charlie's room; her clicking stops and she rises to stare fixedly out the snowy window at something unseen.
- Characters
- CHARLIE
- Props
- small human manikin; severed pigeon head; drawing pad; still life of the pigeon head; bare diorama stage; M&Ms
- Wardrobe
- Charlie in her pajamas
- VFX/Stunts
- Glint of light flashing across the room
- Notes
- The recurring 'streak of light' (Paimon's presence) first sweeps Charlie's room. The unfinished diorama is the future cult altar.
- Camera
- Medium from behind, girl framed in the bright window
- Lighting
- Cold snow-bounced daylight, a sudden glinting streak
- Mood
- Summoned
KITCHEN - SAME TIME
mounting pressureAnnie reads an email from the Asher Gallery asking for progress photos and is suddenly overwhelmed by the looming deadline.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- smartphone; gallery email
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Gallery deadline pressure builds.
- Camera
- Medium, phone screen and face in shared focus
- Lighting
- Bright even kitchen daylight
- Mood
- Mounting pressure
WOODS - MINUTES LATER
sleepwalking pullCoatless and trance-like, Charlie slogs through snow following a fresh trail of mysterious footprints, a fire crackling somewhere ahead.
- Characters
- CHARLIE
- Props
- footprints in snow
- Wardrobe
- Charlie in regular shoes, no coat, dressed in pajamas
- VFX/Stunts
- Extreme high-angle / bird's-eye photography
- Notes
- Charlie is lured into the woods by an unseen force following footprints of unknown source. Max follows.
- Camera
- Extreme high-angle bird's-eye looking straight down
- Lighting
- Flat cold daylight on snow, distant warm fire-glow ahead
- Mood
- Sleepwalking pull
ANNIE'S WORKSHOP - SAME TIME
reluctant permissionDistracted and anxious at her miniatures, Annie negotiates Peter's party request and orders him to take his sister along.
- Characters
- ANNIE; PETER
- Props
- miniature; paintbrush
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Annie insists Peter bring Charlie to the party - the fatal decision she will later blame herself for.
- Camera
- Medium two-shot, artist at the bench, son in the doorway
- Lighting
- Warm work-lamp on the models, cooler hall behind
- Mood
- Reluctant permission
HALLWAY - MOMENTS LATER
absencePeter finds Charlie's room empty and calls her name into the silent hall.
- Characters
- PETER
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Slug is labeled EXT. HALLWAY but plays inside the upstairs hall; grouped to graham house.
- Camera
- Medium from the hall, empty room framed in the doorway
- Lighting
- Cool flat daylight
- Mood
- Absence
WORKSHOP - MOMENTS LATER
alarmPeter reports Charlie isn't in the house and a frustrated Annie throws down her paintbrush insisting she must be.
- Characters
- PETER; ANNIE
- Props
- paintbrush
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Medium, mother at bench reacting toward the doorway
- Lighting
- Flat daylight, work-lamp fill
- Mood
- Alarm
WOODS - SAME TIME
occult glimpseIn the distance Charlie sees a ring of burning torches around an inanimate white-robed body tied to a pole, as Annie arrives oblivious and drags her home.
- Characters
- CHARLIE; ANNIE
- Props
- ring of burning torches; old woman's body tied to a pole; fine white silk robe
- Wardrobe
- The tied body dressed in fine white silk, resembling Ellen Leigh
- VFX/Stunts
- Practical fire torches; Ritual body rig on pole
- Notes
- First glimpse of the cult ritual - a white-robed corpse resembling the grandmother, which Annie never sees. Charlie says 'I want grandma.'
- Camera
- Wide, girl foreground, torch-ring tiny in deep background
- Lighting
- Cold daylight, distant warm torch-glow
- Mood
- Occult glimpse
FOYER - MOMENTS LATER
coercedAnnie stamps snow off her boots and forces a reluctant Charlie to go to the party with Peter, whose welcoming nod hides cold, uninviting eyes.
- Characters
- ANNIE; CHARLIE; PETER
- Props
- snow boots
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Annie sends Charlie to the party against the girl's wishes; the no-drinking conversation.
- Camera
- Medium three-shot in the foyer
- Lighting
- Cool door-light, warm interior fill
- Mood
- Coerced
HIGHWAY
foreboding transitA full moon glows pale-blue over a lonely highway as the green family car flashes past.
- Characters
- None
- Props
- green family car
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- The 'green car' identified; full moon and lonely highway set the fatal route.
- Camera
- Wide static landscape, car small and crossing
- Lighting
- Cold dusk with pale full-moon backlight
- Mood
- Foreboding transit
GRAHAM FAMILY CAR
ominous resentmentPeter's eyes narrow resentfully at clicking Charlie in the mirror as the car passes a telephone pole carved with a small hidden sigil.
- Characters
- PETER; CHARLIE
- Props
- rear-view mirror; telephone pole with carved sigil
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- The fatal telephone pole is planted with a carved sigil - the cult engineered the accident site.
- Camera
- Tight on the driver, mirror reflection of the sister in frame
- Lighting
- Low blue night with green dash glow
- Mood
- Ominous resentment
PARTY HOUSE
reluctanceAt the foot of a bustling party house, a suddenly nervous Charlie slows to a stop, begging to wait outside.
- Characters
- PETER; CHARLIE
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Wide on the entrance, siblings small at the steps
- Lighting
- Warm interior spill versus cold night
- Mood
- Reluctance
PARTY HOUSE - MOMENTS LATER
fateful abandonmentAn extreme close-up of walnuts being brutalized on a chopping board cuts to Peter abandoning Charlie by promising the kitchen's chocolate cake.
- Characters
- PETER; CHARLIE; AARON; BRIDGET
- Props
- cake; walnuts; chopping board; drawing pad; bag of marijuana; chocolate cake
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- The nut-laden cake (foreshadowed by ECU of walnuts) is the allergen. Peter ditches Charlie to chase Bridget.
- Camera
- Macro on the walnuts, rack focus to Peter leaving Charlie
- Lighting
- Warm tungsten party light
- Mood
- Fateful abandonment
OTHER ROOM
awkward exposureBridget announces Peter has weed to two boys watching videos, and Peter immediately deflates at being outed.
- Characters
- BRIDGET; PETER; HISPANIC BOY; BLONDE BOY
- Props
- tablet
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Medium group, favoring Peter's deflating face
- Lighting
- Low warm room light plus tablet glow
- Mood
- Awkward exposure
KITCHEN - SAME TIME
innocent dangerShy and magnetized to the chocolate cake, Charlie accepts a slice studded with visible nuts without meeting the girl's eyes.
- Characters
- CHARLIE
- Props
- chocolate cake
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Charlie unknowingly eats the nut-laden cake - the trigger of her allergic reaction.
- Camera
- Close on the slice passing to the girl, eyes down
- Lighting
- Warm overhead kitchen light
- Mood
- Innocent danger
OTHER ROOM - SAME TIME
distractionPeter packs a bong as Annie's call goes ignored into his pocket, a missed-voicemail light beginning to blink.
- Characters
- PETER; BRIDGET; HISPANIC BOY
- Props
- large bong; marijuana; cell phone
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Annie's voicemail (later heard by Peter in the bathroom) goes unanswered here.
- Camera
- Medium, phone screen prominent in foreground
- Lighting
- Low warm party haze
- Mood
- Distraction
LIVING ROOM - SAME TIME
first symptomLips smeared with chocolate, Charlie swallows again and again, looking faintly concerned as she draws herself a cup of water.
- Characters
- CHARLIE
- Props
- empty plate; red cups
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Charlie's allergic reaction begins.
- Camera
- Medium on the girl, party softened around her
- Lighting
- Warm tungsten party light
- Mood
- First symptom
ANNIE'S WORKSHOP
looming menaceAnnie plants a ghostly figurine of her mother looming outside the open master-bedroom door of the dollhouse where she and Steve sleep.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- Graham house miniature; figurine of ghostly old woman in bathrobe
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- The miniatures mirror the haunting in real time.
- Camera
- Macro into the dollhouse bedroom, looming figurine at the door
- Lighting
- Tight warm work-lamp, surrounding black
- Mood
- Looming menace
PARTY HOUSE - LIVING ROOM
swelling panicCheeks pink and inflamed, Charlie keeps assembling her manikin on the couch and waves off a concerned boy as she visibly worsens.
- Characters
- CHARLIE; CONCERNED BOY
- Props
- small manikin
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Allergic-reaction facial swelling/inflammation makeup
- Notes
- Charlie's reaction visibly intensifying.
- Camera
- Medium on the girl and the worried boy
- Lighting
- Warm party tungsten
- Mood
- Swelling panic
OTHER ROOM - MOMENTS LATER
horror dawningMid-bong-hit, Peter turns to a terrified Charlie who chokes out that her tongue is getting bigger.
- Characters
- PETER; CHARLIE
- Props
- bong
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- The crisis ignites: 'My tongue is getting bigger.' Hard cut out.
- Camera
- Fast medium between brother and sister
- Lighting
- Low warm haze, hard shadow
- Mood
- Horror dawning
CAR
frantic rescueA distraught Peter shoves a red-faced, suffocating Charlie into the back seat and bolts for the driver's side.
- Characters
- PETER; CHARLIE
- Props
- family car
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Anaphylaxis facial makeup
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Wide handheld, boy moving fast around the car
- Lighting
- Cold night with hard white spill
- Mood
- Frantic rescue
CAR (MOVING)
catastropheAs Peter swerves around a deer carcass at 80 mph, Charlie's head, thrust out the window for air, collides with a telephone pole and is ripped clean off.
- Characters
- PETER; CHARLIE
- Props
- family car; deer carcass; telephone pole; voicemail-waiting phone
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- High-speed driving stunt; Deer-carcass road dressing; Decapitation gag - Charlie's head ripped off against telephone pole
- Notes
- The film's central tragedy. Peter does not look back, turns the mirror away, and drives home with the headless torso - mirroring Annie's later denial behavior.
- Camera
- Tight interior, whip toward the open window and onrushing pole
- Lighting
- Cold night, harsh headlight bounce
- Mood
- Catastrophe
GRAHAM HOUSE
dissociationThe car idles into the driveway with its door-alarm dinging; Peter steps out as if in a dream and walks stiffly into the house.
- Characters
- PETER
- Props
- family car
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Peter leaves Charlie's body in the car.
- Camera
- Wide static, car and house, boy small and stiff
- Lighting
- Cold night, car headlights raking the snow
- Mood
- Dissociation
HALLWAY
numb retreatPeter stalks woodenly past his sleeping parents and climbs into bed, leaving his door open.
- Characters
- PETER
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Slow track following the boy down the hall to bed
- Lighting
- Very low blue night, thin moonlight
- Mood
- Numb retreat
BEDROOM - THE NEXT MORNING
discovery horrorPeter lies wide-eyed as Annie's cheerful goodbye outside dissolves into a shrill, inhuman scream when she discovers the body.
- Characters
- PETER; ANNIE; STEVE
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Annie discovers Charlie's headless body in the car; the scream is heard offscreen. Peter's POV.
- Camera
- Static close on the boy's face, sound off-screen
- Lighting
- Pale cold morning light
- Mood
- Discovery horror
HIGHWAY
grisly aftermathCharlie's severed head rests roadside, nose smashed, one eye milky, completely blanketed in crawling ants.
- Characters
- None
- Props
- Charlie's severed head; ants
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Severed head prosthetic; Practical ants infestation
- Notes
- Ants on the head establish the ant motif that recurs in Annie's nightmare.
- Camera
- Tight static on the roadside head, ants in focus
- Lighting
- Flat grey overcast morning
- Mood
- Grisly aftermath
GRAHAM HALLWAY
shattering griefA storm rages as Annie wails 'I just wanna die' through a cracked bedroom door while Peter stands paralyzed on the stairs, listening.
- Characters
- ANNIE; STEVE; PETER
- Props
- pill
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Storm outside. Annie's anguish; Peter overhears her cry 'Charlie!'
- Camera
- Wide stairwell, son on the stairs, lit door above
- Lighting
- Cold storm-blue, intermittent lightning
- Mood
- Shattering grief
CEMETERY
burial descentAs Charlie's coffin sinks into the earth, the camera follows it down through dirt and earthworms until everything is swallowed in black.
- Characters
- ANNIE; PETER; STEVE
- Props
- coffin
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Camera tracking down into the grave through soil
- Notes
- Charlie's funeral; the descending-into-earth shot.
- Camera
- Vertical descent following the coffin down into the grave
- Lighting
- Flat grey overcast above, blackness below
- Mood
- Burial descent
HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - LATE AFTERNOON
numb mourningAt the wake, everything glossed as if seen through grief-fogged glass, Steve absently accepts condolences in a daze.
- Characters
- STEVE
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- The wake.
- Camera
- Slow drifting medium on Steve, mourners soft around
- Lighting
- Soft diffused dusk, gauzy and low-contrast
- Mood
- Numb mourning
ANNIE & STEVE'S BEDROOM - SAME TIME
withdrawalAnnie lies facing the wall, her back to us, absent from her own daughter's wake.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Static wide from the doorway, her back to camera
- Lighting
- Dim cool dusk through curtains
- Mood
- Withdrawal
LIBRARY - SAME TIME
self-loathingPeter hides in the library, watching the wake through textured glass with an almost deranged look, until a man stumbles in on him.
- Characters
- PETER; MAN
- Props
- cell phone; textured glass door
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Peter battered by guilt and trauma.
- Camera
- Medium on the boy at the glass, intruder entering behind
- Lighting
- Low warm gloom, diffused light through textured glass
- Mood
- Self-loathing
BATHROOM
suppressed panicPeter locks himself in the bathroom and turns on the sink to mask his panic with white noise.
- Characters
- PETER
- Props
- sink
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Tight on the boy over the sink, water running
- Lighting
- Dim cool overhead, hard tile reflections
- Mood
- Suppressed panic
LIVING ROOM
isolationThe last mourners filter out and Steve stands lost in the middle of the empty room.
- Characters
- STEVE
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Wide, father small and central in the emptying room
- Lighting
- Fading warm dusk, low and soft
- Mood
- Isolation
HALLWAY - MOMENTS LATER
quiet worrySteve knocks gently on the locked bathroom door, the running sink faint behind it, and gets no answer.
- Characters
- STEVE
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Medium on the father at the door
- Lighting
- Low warm hall sconce
- Mood
- Quiet worry
BATHROOM - SAME TIME
tormentOn the tub's edge, Peter replays Annie's loving voicemail from the night Charlie died, a wound he keeps reopening.
- Characters
- PETER; ANNIE
- Props
- cell phone; voicemail
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Annie's saved voicemail ('have a good time at the BBQ') heard - the lie about a BBQ surfaces.
- Camera
- Close on the boy on the tub edge, phone to ear
- Lighting
- Dim cool overhead, soft tile glow
- Mood
- Torment
ANNIE & STEVE'S BEDROOM - MOMENTS LATER
vanishingSteve stops at the bedroom door to find Annie gone, sheets dragged halfway off the mattress.
- Characters
- STEVE
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Wide from the doorway, empty bed centered
- Lighting
- Dim cool dusk
- Mood
- Vanishing
CHARLIE'S BEDROOM - MOMENTS LATER
grief releaseSteve flips through Charlie's drawing pad, past severed-animal-head sketches to the crowned pigeon head, then a blank page, and the floodgates open.
- Characters
- STEVE
- Props
- drawing pad; drawings of severed animal heads; drawing of pigeon head with crown
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- The crowned pigeon head drawing prefigures the cult's crowned-figure iconography. Steve finally weeps.
- Camera
- Over-shoulder on the pad, then cut closer to his crumbling face
- Lighting
- Low warm dusk, soft
- Mood
- Grief release
CHARLIE'S BEDROOM
avoidanceFramed by the doorway, Peter walks past Charlie's empty snowlit room, determinedly refusing to look in.
- Characters
- PETER
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Static, room framed through the doorway, boy crossing the hall
- Lighting
- Cold blue snow-light in the empty room
- Mood
- Avoidance
PETER'S BEDROOM
restless dreadUnable to sleep, Peter stares out at the looming treehouse, then gathers his blanket and pillow at 1:32 AM and leaves the room.
- Characters
- PETER
- Props
- alarm clock; blanket; pillow
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Treehouse fixation; Peter heads out to sleep there.
- Camera
- Medium, boy at the window, treehouse beyond
- Lighting
- Cold blue night, faint clock-face glow
- Mood
- Restless dread
GRAHAM HOUSE - MOMENTS LATER
haunted approachIn parka and Elmer Fudd hat, Peter notes Charlie's fly-buzzing shoebox at the tree's base before scaling the treehouse.
- Characters
- PETER
- Props
- blanket; pillow; Charlie's shoebox; tree climbing handles
- Wardrobe
- Peter in parka and Elmer Fudd hat
- VFX/Stunts
- Tree-climbing
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Low angle up the trunk, boy at the base by the shoebox
- Lighting
- Cold moonlit blue, deep shadow
- Mood
- Haunted approach
TREEHOUSE
startled flightAbout to sleep, Peter senses someone and turns to find Annie bundled asleep in the corner, sending him fleeing and falling hard from the tree.
- Characters
- PETER; ANNIE
- Props
- blanket; pillow; wet climbing handles
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Fall from treehouse stunt
- Notes
- Slow dissolve transition out.
- Camera
- Medium, boy foreground reacting, mother revealed in the corner
- Lighting
- Cold blue moonlight through planks
- Mood
- Startled flight
CLASSROOM
intrusive guiltThe teacher's voice warps as if underwater while Peter flashes to the rear-view mirror and Charlie's blurred, headless body just out of frame.
- Characters
- PETER; BRIDGET
- Props
- rear-view mirror insert
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Peter's obsessive replaying of the accident. His eyes harden at Bridget.
- Camera
- Medium on Peter, surreal rear-view-mirror insert
- Lighting
- Flat daylight, distorted cool insert
- Mood
- Intrusive guilt
GRAHAM HOUSE
paranoiaAnnie goes pale pulling a 'Calling All Skeptics!' seance brochure from the mail, glancing around as if suddenly being watched.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- mail; public seance brochure
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- The spiritual-medium Suzanne Marlowe brochure planted (the seance Joan later attends).
- Camera
- Medium on the woman at the mailbox or step
- Lighting
- Cold flat overcast daylight
- Mood
- Paranoia
WORKSHOP
depletedNumb and exhausted at the hospice miniature, Annie hears the front door unlock and looks toward the noise.
- Characters
- ANNIE; STEVE
- Props
- hospice miniature; Graham house miniature
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Medium at the bench, head turned toward off-screen sound
- Lighting
- Soft flat daylight
- Mood
- Depleted
FOYER - SAME TIME
homecomingSteve calls for Annie as Max bounds up to greet him, tail wagging.
- Characters
- STEVE
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Medium, father in the doorway, dog leaping to him
- Lighting
- Bright warm door-light
- Mood
- Homecoming
WORKSHOP - SAME TIME
avoidanceHearing Steve climb the stairs, Annie silently eases the workshop door shut to avoid him.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Close on the hand and door, woman behind
- Lighting
- Soft flat daylight
- Mood
- Avoidance
HALLWAY
estrangementSteve eases the door open to find Annie 'working' with headphones on, and smiles sadly before leaving her alone.
- Characters
- STEVE; ANNIE
- Props
- headphones
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Over-shoulder past the husband to the wife at her bench
- Lighting
- Soft daylight, gentle contrast
- Mood
- Estrangement
KITCHEN - MOMENTS LATER
concealed mistrustSteve quietly dumps the seance brochure in the trash as Annie crosses the doorway unseen behind him.
- Characters
- STEVE; ANNIE
- Props
- mail; seance brochure
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Steve disposes of the seance brochure, Annie watching unseen.
- Camera
- Medium on the husband at the trash, wife soft in deep background
- Lighting
- Bright even kitchen daylight
- Mood
- Concealed mistrust
GRAHAM HOUSE - LATE AFTERNOON
maternal avoidanceFrozen in the parked car so Peter won't see her, Annie watches her son gather his nerve at the front door before she starts the ignition.
- Characters
- ANNIE; PETER
- Props
- blue family car; bicycle
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- The green 'accident' car is gone; only the blue one remains. Annie hides from Peter.
- Camera
- Wide, son at the door, mother hidden in the car
- Lighting
- Cold fading dusk
- Mood
- Maternal avoidance
CATHOLIC HIGH SCHOOL GYMNASIUM
fateful meetingAbout to leave the grief-group lot, Annie is flagged into her headlights by a merry older woman, Joan, who reveals her son and grandson drowned.
- Characters
- ANNIE; JOAN
- Props
- family car; paper with phone number
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Joan introduced - the cult member who will manipulate Annie. She gives Annie her phone number.
- Camera
- Through the windshield onto Joan in the headlights
- Lighting
- Cold dusk, hard white headlight beams
- Mood
- Fateful meeting
FOYER
weary returnAnnie lumbers in and pulls off her snow boots in the dark foyer.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- snow boots
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Wide low foyer, woman small and stooped
- Lighting
- Very low warm light, near-dark
- Mood
- Weary return
LIVING ROOM - MOMENTS LATER
lying coldnessBathed in muted TV glow, Steve wakes to ask where Annie was and she flatly repeats her movie lie before going to bed.
- Characters
- ANNIE; STEVE
- Props
- muted TV; armchair
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Annie maintains the 'at the movies' cover.
- Camera
- Medium two-shot, TV glow on both
- Lighting
- Cool muted TV flicker, otherwise dark
- Mood
- Lying coldness
ANNIE & STEVE'S BEDROOM
marital chillAnnie recoils from Steve's touch and rises with a blanket to sleep elsewhere, intimacy frozen solid.
- Characters
- ANNIE; STEVE
- Props
- blanket
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Annie retreats to the treehouse to sleep.
- Camera
- Wide over the bed, the widening space between them
- Lighting
- Cold blue moonlight
- Mood
- Marital chill
TREEHOUSE
uncanny refugeAn ominous wide finds Annie asleep in Charlie's treehouse between two heaters burning bright orange.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- two large heaters
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Practical heater glow
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Static ominous wide, mother centered between the heaters
- Lighting
- Twin orange heater-glow in near-blackness
- Mood
- Uncanny refuge
PETER'S BEDROOM - SAME TIME
haunting onsetA clicking like Charlie's tongue startles Peter awake; he fixes on a hoodie that for an instant looks like a standing figure.
- Characters
- PETER
- Props
- hoodie sweatshirt
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- The tongue-clicking haunting of Peter begins; the hoodie-as-figure setup pays off later.
- Camera
- Medium on the boy, hoodie-as-figure in the dark corner
- Lighting
- Cold low blue night, deep shadow
- Mood
- Haunting onset
WORKSHOP - THE NEXT DAY
unseen interferenceAs Annie scratches 'Satony' into the miniature wall, a paint bottle tips over on its own near her hand without her touching it.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- replica of Charlie's bedroom; paint bottle; post-it note; Joan's phone number; paper towels
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Self-tipping paint bottle (apparent telekinesis)
- Notes
- First overt poltergeist beat in the workshop. Joan's number resurfaces in the spilled paint.
- Camera
- Close on the hand and model, bottle tipping in frame
- Lighting
- Soft flat daylight
- Mood
- Unseen interference
HIGH SCHOOL HALLWAY
peer pullThree giggling stoners intercept Peter in the hall, Brendan miming a joint to invite him on a 'walk.'
- Characters
- PETER; BRENDAN
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Medium group in the hall
- Lighting
- Flat school fluorescent daylight
- Mood
- Peer pull
HIGH SCHOOL SOCCER FIELD
trauma flashbackUnder the bleachers, a reluctant hit triggers Peter into a panic attack echoing Charlie's death - 'My tongue is getting bigger' - as the oblivious stoners laugh.
- Characters
- PETER; BRENDAN; STONER #2; STONER #3
- Props
- pipe; weed
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Peter's panic attack mirrors Charlie's anaphylaxis, fusing his guilt with her death.
- Camera
- Medium low under the bleachers, slatted light bars
- Lighting
- Hard daylight slatted through the bleachers
- Mood
- Trauma flashback
STREET
drawn inAnnie hunts an address scrawled on the back of Joan's phone-number paper, arriving at a large red-brick apartment building.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- paper with Joan's number and address
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Wide, woman small against the brick building
- Lighting
- Flat urban daylight
- Mood
- Drawn in
APARTMENT BUILDING - THIRD FLOOR HALLWAY
arrivalAnnie knocks at apartment 316, looking down at a handmade 'JOANIE' welcome mat, before Joan opens the door delighted.
- Characters
- ANNIE; JOAN
- Props
- hand-made welcome mat reading JOANIE
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- The embroidered welcome mat - later revealed to match Annie's mother's craft - is the clue linking Joan to the family.
- Camera
- Medium at the door, mat in lower foreground
- Lighting
- Even warm hallway light
- Mood
- Arrival
JOAN'S APARTMENT
false warmthIn a cheerfully bright apartment, Annie notes the welcome mat resembles her mother's embroidery as Joan pours tea.
- Characters
- ANNIE; JOAN
- Props
- tea kettle; welcome mat; tea cups
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Annie remarks her mother used to embroider mats just like Joan's.
- Camera
- Medium two-shot, mat visible in frame
- Lighting
- Warm bright apartment light
- Mood
- False warmth
JOAN'S APARTMENT - MINUTES LATER
intimate confessionOver tea, Annie and Joan trade the grisly details of their dead - Charlie's headless tarry body, Joan's fish-eaten son - finding morbid comfort, as Annie pulls a black herb from her mouth without noticing.
- Characters
- ANNIE; JOAN
- Props
- tea; pill; black herb
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Annie recounts discovering Charlie's body and her own sleepwalking paint-thinner-and-matches incident. The black herb in her tea hints Joan is drugging her.
- Camera
- Intimate two-shot across the tea table
- Lighting
- Warm soft apartment light
- Mood
- Intimate confession
GRAHAM HOUSE - KITCHEN - MOMENTS LATER
withdrawalVoice cracked from his bleacher panic attack, Peter brushes past a carrot-chopping Steve and hurries upstairs.
- Characters
- STEVE; PETER
- Props
- carrots
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Medium, father at the counter, son crossing behind
- Lighting
- Bright even kitchen daylight
- Mood
- Withdrawal
PETER'S ROOM
blocked griefSteve gently offers Peter someone to talk to, but the boy deflects every question back, unable to confront his grief, then chills over.
- Characters
- PETER; STEVE
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Steve and Peter's stalled attempt at connection.
- Camera
- Medium two-shot, father and son not quite facing
- Lighting
- Soft daylight, low contrast
- Mood
- Blocked grief
WORKSHOP
marital ruptureSteve discovers Annie has sculpted a miniature of the accident - Charlie's decapitated head and Peter in the car - and erupts, calling it cruel and useless.
- Characters
- ANNIE; STEVE
- Props
- miniature of the highway accident; figurine of Charlie's decapitated head; figurine of Peter in the car
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Annie's compulsion to recreate the trauma in miniature ignites a fight.
- Camera
- Close on the miniature, then the husband's furious reaction
- Lighting
- Tight warm work-lamp, surrounding dark
- Mood
- Marital rupture
DINING ROOM
scalding confrontationProvoked across the dinner table, Annie explodes at Peter that he can't take responsibility, and he counters with the devastating question of why his mother made Charlie go.
- Characters
- ANNIE; STEVE; PETER
- Props
- pill; empty fourth chair
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- The film's centerpiece dinner-table eruption. Peter: 'I didn't want to take her, and she didn't want to go. So why was she there?'
- Camera
- Wide table master, then push along the mother-son axis
- Lighting
- Warm pendant over the table, edges dark
- Mood
- Scalding confrontation
ANNIE AND STEVE'S BEDROOM - MINUTES LATER
blame and helplessnessSteve insists they have no control over anything, the ceiling could collapse and who would they blame, as Annie spirals into self-blame for sending Charlie out.
- Characters
- ANNIE; STEVE
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Annie admits she made Peter take Charlie. Steve's 'we have no control over anything' fatalism.
- Camera
- Medium two-shot on the bed
- Lighting
- Cold low blue night
- Mood
- Blame and helplessness
PETER'S BEDROOM
shared breakdownPeter sobs that he should be dead because at least Charlie could make things, and a weeping Steve holds his head, both apologizing.
- Characters
- PETER; STEVE
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Peter confesses he didn't care about Charlie - 'That's how it happened.'
- Camera
- Close two-shot, father holding the son's head
- Lighting
- Cold blue with a faint warm lamp
- Mood
- Shared breakdown
ANNIE & STEVE'S BEDROOM - SAME TIME
remorseBack to us, Annie whispers 'I'm sorry' and her shoulders begin to heave with sobs as Peter's muffled weeping bleeds through the walls.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Fade to black ends the act.
- Camera
- Static on her back, shoulders shaking
- Lighting
- Cold dim blue night
- Mood
- Remorse
WORKSHOP - DAY - DAYS LATER
depleted resolveGaunt and lethargic, Annie stares at her unfinished miniatures beneath a Post-It commanding 'KEEP WORKING!'
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- unfinished miniatures; post-it note reading KEEP WORKING
- Wardrobe
- Annie in an old T-shirt and pajama bottoms
- Notes
- Time has passed; Annie has lost weight.
- Camera
- Medium, woman at the bench, Post-it in frame
- Lighting
- Pale flat daylight, low energy
- Mood
- Depleted resolve
ART SUPPLY STORE
seductive hopeAnnie runs into a beaming, transformed Joan in the chalk aisle, who confides that a spiritual medium conjured her dead grandson.
- Characters
- ANNIE; JOAN
- Props
- shopping cart; chalk
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Joan baits Annie with the seance, planting the idea of contacting Charlie. Joan invites Annie over.
- Camera
- Medium two-shot in the aisle
- Lighting
- Bright flat retail fluorescent
- Mood
- Seductive hope
JOAN'S APARTMENT
ritual immersionJoan blacks out the window, lights a black candle, and guides Annie's hand onto an upturned glass to summon 'Louie' in the dark.
- Characters
- ANNIE; JOAN
- Props
- sweetgrass; upturned drinking glass; blacked-out window; black candle
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Joan teaches Annie the glass-sliding seance technique - the trap that hands Annie the means to invite the spirit home.
- Camera
- Close on the two hands on the glass, candle behind
- Lighting
- Single black-candle flame, surrounding black
- Mood
- Ritual immersion
CAR (MOVING)
creeping hauntStopped at a red light, Annie hears tongue-clicking in the empty back seat and turns, white-faced, to nothing.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- family car
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- The seance content (the chalkboard 'I LOV YU GRANMA', the brushed hair) plays out at the apartment in the prior pages; Annie drives home shaken and now hears Charlie's clicking.
- Camera
- From the back seat toward her turning face, empty seat foreground
- Lighting
- Cold dusk with a red traffic-light wash
- Mood
- Creeping haunt
GRAHAM HOUSE
miniaturized dreadA wide of the moonlit house looks uncannily like one of Annie's miniatures, all lights dark save a single glowing window.
- Characters
- None
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- House-as-dollhouse motif reinforced.
- Camera
- Static symmetrical wide, the house centered
- Lighting
- Cold moonlit blue, one warm window
- Mood
- Miniaturized dread
ANNIE & STEVE'S BEDROOM - SAME TIME
secret schemingSteve sleeps as Annie whispers intensely behind the lit bathroom door, asking 'Can it be anything? Like her clothes?'
- Characters
- ANNIE; STEVE
- Props
- phone
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Annie secretly consulting Joan about a 'link' object for a home seance.
- Camera
- Wide, sleeping husband foreground, lit bathroom door beyond
- Lighting
- Cold blue night, warm bathroom slice
- Mood
- Secret scheming
PETER'S BEDROOM
ominous purposeAnnie leans over the sleeping Peter, strangely hopeful, begging forgiveness before rousing him for something she's 'figured out.'
- Characters
- ANNIE; PETER
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Annie wakes Peter for the home seance.
- Camera
- High angle over the bed, mother leaning in
- Lighting
- Cold low blue night
- Mood
- Ominous purpose
ANNIE & STEVE'S BEDROOM - MOMENTS LATER
uneasy summonsAnnie nudges Steve awake to join 'something together,' with Peter waiting nervously in the unlit hallway.
- Characters
- ANNIE; STEVE; PETER
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Medium, bed foreground, son dim in the doorway
- Lighting
- Cold low blue night
- Mood
- Uneasy summons
STAIRWAY - MOMENTS LATER
descent into ritualAnnie leads the wary pair down the dark hall toward the unlit dining room, Peter whispering 'Dad?'
- Characters
- ANNIE; STEVE; PETER
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Wide following the three down the dark hall
- Lighting
- Very low blue night
- Mood
- Descent into ritual
DINING ROOM
possession terrorAt the candlelit table Annie falls into a trance and speaks in Charlie's voice, crying out blindly 'Why are you scaring me?!' until Steve hurls water in her face.
- Characters
- ANNIE; STEVE; PETER
- Props
- upturned drinking glass; Charlie's drawing pad; Charlie's hoodie; black candle; pencil lead; car drawing; glass of water
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Self-relighting candle; Glass moving on its own; Trance/possession performance; Door slamming on a gust
- Notes
- The home seance. Annie is possessed and channels Charlie's voice. Steve breaks the trance with water. Centerpiece supernatural set-piece.
- Camera
- Tight on Annie's tranced face across the table, then the water thrown
- Lighting
- Single black-candle flame, deep surrounding dark
- Mood
- Possession terror
HOUSE
fractureOutside, a shaking Steve says he's terrified of Annie and demands they see Dr. Stetson, as Peter watches from a window.
- Characters
- STEVE; ANNIE; PETER
- Props
- towel
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Annie probes whether 'something happened' when she blacked out, hinting she knows she's a conduit.
- Camera
- Wide, couple in the yard, son framed in the window above
- Lighting
- Cold night, single warm window
- Mood
- Fracture
ANNIE AND STEVE'S BEDROOM
dreadIn icy-blue moonlight Annie lies awake beside a sleeping Steve, too anxious to rest.
- Characters
- ANNIE; STEVE
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Bridges into the ant nightmare.
- Camera
- Static high angle over the bed
- Lighting
- Icy-blue moonlight, cold and even
- Mood
- Dread
HALLWAY
nightmare lureAnnie follows a trail of black ants from the window straight toward Peter's open bedroom door.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- trail of ants
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Practical/CGI ant trail
- Notes
- Part of Annie's nightmare.
- Camera
- Low angle along the ant trail toward the open door
- Lighting
- Cold blue dream-light
- Mood
- Nightmare lure
PETER'S BEDROOM
buried confessionAnts swarm Peter's head before the dream shifts and Annie confesses she tried to miscarry him, both suddenly drenched in paint thinner as an offscreen fire ignites.
- Characters
- ANNIE; PETER
- Props
- black ants; paint thinner
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Ants enveloping Peter's head; Paint-thinner drench; Off-screen fire glow
- Notes
- Dream-within-dream. Annie admits 'I never wanted to be your mother' and the attempted miscarriage. Max's barking swells to bridge the cut.
- Camera
- Close on the ant-swarmed head, then pull to the drenched pair
- Lighting
- Cold dream-blue invaded by off-screen fire-orange
- Mood
- Buried confession
ANNIE & STEVE'S BEDROOM
dawning wrongnessAnnie wakes with a start to a fly on her face and Max barking wildly, finding Steve's side of the bed and his pillow gone.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- fly
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Steve has moved to the couch; the fly/ant infestation continues.
- Camera
- Close on her waking face, empty bedside beyond
- Lighting
- Cold low blue night
- Mood
- Dawning wrongness
PETER'S BEDROOM - SAME TIME
haunted stillnessLights on, Peter sits traumatized on his bed's edge in a wide high-angle composition matched eerily to the next cut.
- Characters
- PETER
- Wardrobe
- Peter in pajamas
- Notes
- Matched-cut composition into the classroom.
- Camera
- Wide high-angle, boy small and central
- Lighting
- Even overhead bedroom light
- Mood
- Haunted stillness
CLASSROOM - NEXT DAY
self-turned-enemyA glint of light flashes to the window where Peter's own reflection stares back, its eyes hardening bitterly against him.
- Characters
- PETER; TEACHER
- Props
- window; hall pass
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Reflection acting independently
- Notes
- The malevolent presence inhabits Peter's reflection.
- Camera
- Medium on Peter and his window reflection
- Lighting
- Flat daylight, cold glassy reflection
- Mood
- Self-turned-enemy
STEVE'S OFFICE
alarmAs Steve drafts a worried email about Annie, Peter calls in near-hysterics: 'Something's at the school. It followed me here!'
- Characters
- STEVE; PETER
- Props
- computer; search engine; half-composed email; cell phone
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Strange static on the phone line
- Notes
- Steve secretly researches grief hallucinations; Peter reports being threatened.
- Camera
- Medium, father at the desk, phone to ear
- Lighting
- Soft office daylight, screen glow
- Mood
- Alarm
ANNIE'S WORKSHOP - SAME TIME
destructive collapsePushed past breaking by the gallery's voicemail, Annie smashes every miniature with a hammer, sparing only the pristine Graham house replica.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- cordless phone; flies; funeral home model; balsa wood; answering machine; hammer; Graham house replica
- Wardrobe
- Annie still in her nightgown
- VFX/Stunts
- Miniatures smashed apart
- Notes
- Annie destroys her life's work in a rage; the Graham House miniature survives, signaling its special significance.
- Camera
- Wide, woman mid-swing, intact replica isolated in frame
- Lighting
- Harsh flat daylight
- Mood
- Destructive collapse
FOYER - MOMENTS LATER
creeping rotSteve and Peter enter to a foul smell and Steve swats a fly, wondering aloud if something died in the house.
- Characters
- STEVE; PETER
- Props
- flies
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- The decomposition smell from the attic body intensifies.
- Camera
- Medium, both in the foyer, fly swat mid-gesture
- Lighting
- Flat daylight
- Mood
- Creeping rot
HALLWAY
interrogationSteve calls in Dr. Stetson, who quietly competency-questions Annie amid buzzing flies while she seethes that her husband summoned a peer to investigate her.
- Characters
- STEVE; PETER; ANNIE; DR. STETSON
- Props
- phone; flies
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Dr. Stetson introduced. He performs an orientation assessment on Annie. Steve discovered the demolished workshop.
- Camera
- Medium group in the hallway, favoring Annie's resentment
- Lighting
- Flat daylight
- Mood
- Interrogation
GRAHAM HOUSE - LATER
horrible revelationExamining the spared Graham house replica, Steve and Annie find a headless Peter figurine and a bloodied Annie figurine kneeling in the attic - additions neither made.
- Characters
- ANNIE; STEVE; DR. STETSON
- Props
- Graham house replica; headless figurine in Peter's clothes; figurine of Annie in bloodied nightgown
- Wardrobe
- The Annie figurine dressed in the same nightgown Annie wears now
- Notes
- Dr. Stetson leaves. The miniature has been altered by an unseen force, prophesying the family's fate. Slug labeled 'LATER' continues the Stetson visit; grouped to graham house.
- Camera
- Close into the model attic, then the couple's stunned faces
- Lighting
- Soft daylight on the replica
- Mood
- Horrible revelation
ANNIE'S WORKSHOP - MOMENTS LATER
dread recognitionAmong the wreckage Steve spots the altered Graham house replica and bitterly chuckles, 'I was wondering when Peter would get switched with Charlie.'
- Characters
- STEVE; ANNIE
- Props
- ruined miniatures; figurine of Annie's mother holding out breast; Graham house replica
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Closer look at the tampered replica - the swap of Peter for Charlie and the bloodied attic Annie.
- Camera
- Medium on the father with the replica
- Lighting
- Harsh flat daylight
- Mood
- Dread recognition
LIVING ROOM - MINUTES LATER
exhaustionDrained and resentful, Steve downs three sleeping pills on the couch, muttering that he's always the one holding it together.
- Characters
- STEVE
- Props
- prescription bottle of sleeping pills; blanket; pillow
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Steve drugged into deep sleep, explaining why he won't stir during the night's horrors.
- Camera
- Medium on the father on the couch, pills in hand
- Lighting
- Low warm single lamp
- Mood
- Exhaustion
WORKSHOP - LATER THAT NIGHT
supernatural summonsFrom the dark workshop Annie hears a pencil furiously scratching paper down the hall as flies cluster around the attic door.
- Characters
- ANNIE; PETER
- Props
- flies
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Flies converge on the attic hatch. Annie follows the phantom drawing sound.
- Camera
- Wide from the workshop toward the dark hall, flies at the hatch
- Lighting
- Very low blue night
- Mood
- Supernatural summons
CHARLIE'S BEDROOM
phantom drawingIn the empty room, Charlie's drawing pad fills itself with a materializing sketch and flips its own pages as Annie's eyes widen in horror.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- Charlie's drawing pad
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Drawing materializing and pages flipping on their own
- Notes
- The drawings (revealed later) are Peter with X'd-out eyes.
- Camera
- Medium, the pad in foreground, mother in the doorway
- Lighting
- Cold low blue night
- Mood
- Phantom drawing
PETER'S BEDROOM
nocturnal assaultCharlie stands clicking in the dark corner, her head drooping and rolling off before two invisible hands seize Peter's chin and yank back as if to tear his head free.
- Characters
- PETER; CHARLIE
- Props
- Nerf basketball
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Charlie apparition; Invisible hands gripping Peter's head
- Notes
- Charlie's apparition and the first physical attack on Peter. Max senses the presence and attacks the door.
- Camera
- Wide, apparition in the corner, boy's head pulled back on the bed
- Lighting
- Cold low blue night, hard shadow
- Mood
- Nocturnal assault
HALLWAY
violent expulsionAn invisible vacuuming force drags barking Max by his hind legs down the stairs and hurls him out the front door, which slams shut.
- Characters
- None
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Dog dragged by invisible force / animal handling and rig
- Notes
- Max is forcibly ejected - the presence removes the family's protector.
- Camera
- Wide down the stairs following the dragged dog
- Lighting
- Cold low blue night
- Mood
- Violent expulsion
LIVING ROOM - SAME TIME
oblivious slumberSteve sleeps the drugged sleep of the dead on the couch as Annie's cries for Peter echo from upstairs.
- Characters
- STEVE; ANNIE
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Static medium on the sleeping father
- Lighting
- Low blue night
- Mood
- Oblivious slumber
PETER'S BEDROOM - SAME TIME
fearful accusationReleased from the phantom hands, a terrified Peter accuses Annie of pulling on his head, and she swears she'd never hurt him while ordering him to tell no one.
- Characters
- ANNIE; PETER
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Annie vows she alone can stop what's happening.
- Camera
- Medium two-shot, boy on the bed, mother over him
- Lighting
- Cold low blue night
- Mood
- Fearful accusation
CHARLIE'S BEDROOM - SAME TIME
marked for deathThe drawing pad reveals page after page of crude sketches of Peter's face with X'd-out eyes, framed by furiously scribbled triangles.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- Charlie's drawing pad; sketches of Peter with X'd-out eyes
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Pages flipping on their own
- Notes
- The drawings explicitly target Peter with the Paimon triangle.
- Camera
- Close on the self-flipping pad and its pages
- Lighting
- Cold low blue night
- Mood
- Marked for death
LIVING ROOM
binding horrorAs Annie tries to burn Charlie's drawing pad, flames erupt on her own arm in perfect sync with the burning page, revealing she is bound to the book.
- Characters
- ANNIE; STEVE
- Props
- Charlie's drawing pad; fireplace fire
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Sympathetic fire - flames on Annie's arm mirroring the burning book
- Notes
- Establishes the lethal rule: whoever burns the link object dies in its place. Sets up the climax.
- Camera
- Close on the burning pad and her igniting arm
- Lighting
- Hot orange firelight, blue surrounding dark
- Mood
- Binding horror
GRAHAM HOUSE
ominous transitionA large moon over the house slam-cuts to a shrill morning sun, time lurching forward.
- Characters
- None
- Props
- moon; sun
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Matched static wides, moon then sun over the house
- Lighting
- Cold moonlight cutting to harsh white morning sun
- Mood
- Ominous transition
HALLWAY
surveillanceSleepless and anxious, Peter glances at the cracked workshop door, behind which Annie secretly watches to make sure he leaves.
- Characters
- PETER; ANNIE
- Wardrobe
- Peter with backpack slung over his shoulder
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Medium on the boy, mother's eye at the door-crack
- Lighting
- Pale flat morning light
- Mood
- Surveillance
JOAN'S APARTMENT BUILDING - THIRD FLOOR - MOMENTS LATER
desperationFrighteningly determined in her nightgown and coat, Annie hammers on Joan's unanswered door.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Wardrobe
- Annie in nightgown under a coat
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Medium on the woman pounding the door
- Lighting
- Even warm hallway light
- Mood
- Desperation
JOAN'S APARTMENT
exposure of the trapThe camera pulls back from the door to reveal Joan's apartment now draped in Paimon sigils, with a photo of Peter, a ritual dagger, and the finished severed-head diorama crowned by a raven's head.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- Paimon sigil drapes; carved triangle on tabletop; photo of Peter; athame ritual dagger; herbs; severed-head diorama; severed raven head with foil crown; severed pigeon, rat and squirrel heads
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Reveals Joan as a cultist; the diorama is built from Charlie's collected heads. The Sigil of Paimon named here.
- Camera
- Slow pull-back from the door revealing the full room
- Lighting
- Dim moody ritual light
- Mood
- Exposure of the trap
HALLWAY
the penny dropsAnnie looks down at the 'JOANIE' welcome mat and a realization hits, sending her racing back to the elevator.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- welcome mat reading JOANIE
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Annie connects the welcome mat to her mother. School bell bridges the cut.
- Camera
- Medium, mat in foreground, woman reacting
- Lighting
- Even warm hallway light
- Mood
- The penny drops
HIGH SCHOOL
supernatural threatAcross a busy road only Peter can perceive, Joan screams the invocation 'SATONY, DEGONY, EPARIGON!' and 'GET OUT, PETER!' like a lunatic.
- Characters
- PETER; JOAN
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Joan's invocation uses the same 'Satony' word carved in Charlie's wall. Nobody else sees or hears her.
- Camera
- Wide from Peter's side across the road to Joan
- Lighting
- Flat daylight
- Mood
- Supernatural threat
ANNIE'S WORKSHOP
buried truthDigging through her mother's boxes, Annie finds welcome mats embroidered ANNIE, CHARLES and CHARLES-with-Paimon-sigil, the demonology tome INVOCATIONS, and a photo of her mother showered in coins beside a younger Joan.
- Characters
- ANNIE; ELLEN; JOAN
- Props
- Mom's Things boxes; welcome mats embroidered ANNIE and CHARLES; Notes on Spiritualism; grimoire; INVOCATIONS book; King Paimon illustration; photo albums titled Memories; necklace
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- The full backstory: Annie's mother was a Paimon cultist, Joan her co-conspirator. The book's rules - 'Paimon will possess the most vulnerable host'; 'Paimon is Male, covetous of a male human body' - and the mother's apology note are read here.
- Camera
- High angle over the spread-out boxes and finds
- Lighting
- Soft flat daylight
- Mood
- Buried truth
HIGH SCHOOL HALLWAY
encroaching menaceA flash of light streaks down the hall and dies at Peter's classroom, where Mr. Davies smiles expectantly through the door's window.
- Characters
- PETER; MR. DAVIES
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Streak of light traveling the hallway
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Wide down the hall following the streak to the door
- Lighting
- Flat daylight cut by a moving light-streak
- Mood
- Encroaching menace
GRAHAM HOUSE - UPSTAIRS HALLWAY - MOMENTS LATER
approaching the sourceAnnie pulls the rope on the fly-blackened attic hatch, releasing a horde of flies before she climbs up.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- photo album; attic hatch rope; flies
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Horde of flies
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Low angle up at the hatch, flies spilling down
- Lighting
- Flat daylight, dark hatch maw
- Mood
- Approaching the source
ATTIC
ghastly discoveryAnnie's flashlight finds a headless old woman's corpse in white silk and, painted in dry blood on the vaulted ceiling above, the Sigil of Paimon crawling with flies.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- flashlight; headless woman's corpse; white silk robe; chalk triangle; Sigil of Paimon painted in blood
- Wardrobe
- Corpse wearing a white silk robe identical to the one Charlie saw in the woods
- VFX/Stunts
- Decapitated corpse prosthetic; Practical flies
- Notes
- The grandmother's exhumed, headless body has been hidden in the attic and turned into a Paimon shrine.
- Camera
- Handheld, flashlight beam sweeping up to the ceiling sigil
- Lighting
- Single hard flashlight cone in blackness
- Mood
- Ghastly discovery
CLASSROOM
violent possessionAn unseen force forces Peter's arm up and smashes his face repeatedly into the desk, breaking his nose in a spray of blood as the class screams.
- Characters
- PETER; MR. DAVIES; BRIDGET
- Props
- desk
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Peter's head slammed into desk by invisible force; Broken-nose blood effect
- Notes
- The presence physically assaults Peter at school, echoing Charlie's clicking and squealing death sounds.
- Camera
- Medium on Peter at the desk, classmates scattering
- Lighting
- Flat daylight
- Mood
- Violent possession
STEVE'S OFFICE
numb avoidanceHaggard and nursing scotch, Steve lets Annie's call and then the school's call go unanswered as the caller ID reveals Peter's high school.
- Characters
- STEVE
- Props
- scotch; cell phone; office phone with caller ID
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Medium on the father, phone with caller ID in frame
- Lighting
- Soft office daylight
- Mood
- Numb avoidance
GRAHAM HOUSE - KITCHEN
unanswered alarmThe land-line rings into an empty kitchen as the school tries the Graham house.
- Characters
- None
- Props
- land-line phone
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Static wide of the empty kitchen, phone prominent
- Lighting
- Flat kitchen daylight
- Mood
- Unanswered alarm
CAR - SAME TIME
frantic vigilEyes crazed, Annie waits in her parked car watching the house, willing Steve to come home as she clutches her phone.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- cell phone; family car
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Tight on the woman in the parked car
- Lighting
- Flat daylight through the glass
- Mood
- Frantic vigil
STEVE'S OFFICE - SAME TIME
shockSteve finally answers the office phone and snaps alert: 'What happened? Which hospital?'
- Characters
- STEVE
- Props
- office phone; drink
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Steve learns Peter is hospitalized.
- Camera
- Medium on the father seizing the phone
- Lighting
- Soft office daylight
- Mood
- Shock
CAR (MOVING) - LATE AFTERNOON
breaking pointDriving home with a bandaged, black-eyed Peter asleep in back, Steve stomps a red light and breaks down crying behind the wheel.
- Characters
- STEVE; PETER
- Props
- rear-view mirror
- Wardrobe
- Peter with heavily bandaged nose and black-and-blue eyes
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Interior, father at the wheel, bandaged son in the mirror or back
- Lighting
- Cold dusk with red light wash
- Mood
- Breaking point
ANNIE'S CAR - LATE AFTERNOON
fresh terrorAnnie's relief curdles to panic as Steve pulls an unconscious, bandaged Peter from the car and she rushes over clutching her mother's photo album.
- Characters
- ANNIE; STEVE; PETER
- Props
- photo album; family car
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Steve reveals Peter smashed his own face into the desk.
- Camera
- Wide at the car, parents and limp son
- Lighting
- Cold fading dusk
- Mood
- Fresh terror
PETER'S BEDROOM
dreadful disclosureLaying the comatose Peter in bed, Annie tells Steve there's a decapitated old woman's body in the attic and urges him to go see for himself.
- Characters
- STEVE; ANNIE; PETER
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Max's barking persists. Annie reveals the attic corpse.
- Camera
- Medium, parents over the bed, son between them
- Lighting
- Soft daylight
- Mood
- Dreadful disclosure
LIVING ROOM
resolveWhile Steve climbs to the attic, Annie rushes to the fireplace and starts a fire.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- fireplace fire
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Annie prepares the fire she intends Steve to use to burn the drawing pad.
- Camera
- Medium on the woman building the fire
- Lighting
- Daylight plus growing hearth glow
- Mood
- Resolve
UPSTAIRS HALLWAY - MOMENTS LATER
horrific climaxAnnie lays out her mother's photos to prove Joan and the cult cursed them, but Steve, convinced she dug up the grave, refuses, so Annie hurls the drawing pad into the fire and Steve instantly ignites into a screaming ball of flame.
- Characters
- STEVE; ANNIE
- Props
- photo album; Charlie's drawing pad; lighter fluid; fireplace fire; Steve's wedding ring
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Steve engulfed in fire (full-body burn); Streak of light entering Annie
- Notes
- The climactic combustion. Burning the link kills Steve in Annie's place; the Paimon presence (streak of light) then enters Annie. Spans hallway and living room across the cut.
- Camera
- Wide across hallway and living room, husband bursting into flame
- Lighting
- Daylight overwhelmed by sudden orange fire
- Mood
- Horrific climax
WOODS
ritual gatheringSnow falls over the woods as faint, war-drum-like percussion thumps steadily from an unseen drum circle.
- Characters
- None
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- The cult assembles for the final ceremony.
- Camera
- Static wide of the dark snowy woods
- Lighting
- Cold blue moonlit night, falling snow
- Mood
- Ritual gathering
PETER'S BEDROOM - SAME TIME
uncanny stalkingCaught in passing headlights, the possessed Annie hangs weightless in the corner with her cheek pressed to the ceiling, then crab-walks across the wall and out the door before Peter can see her.
- Characters
- PETER; ANNIE
- Props
- treehouse candlelight
- Wardrobe
- Annie still in her nightgown
- VFX/Stunts
- Annie floating/ceiling-pressed; Crab-walking across walls
- Notes
- Peter wakes to the treehouse glowing with candlelight; the possessed, weightless Annie stalks him.
- Camera
- Wide, headlights sweeping, mother on the ceiling corner
- Lighting
- Cold blue night raked by passing headlights
- Mood
- Uncanny stalking
HALLWAY
mounting paranoiaA sharp clang of snapped piano wire reverberates as Peter, calling for his parents, finds the attic loud with flies and the rooms empty.
- Characters
- PETER
- Props
- flies; attic hatch
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- The snapped piano wire foreshadows Annie's weapon.
- Camera
- Medium tracking with the boy down the empty hall
- Lighting
- Cold low blue night
- Mood
- Mounting paranoia
FOYER
approaching horrorPeter finds the piano lid open with wires snapped, then moves toward the living room lit by an off-screen flame.
- Characters
- PETER
- Props
- piano; snapped piano wires
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- Annie has stripped the piano of wire to make her saw.
- Camera
- Medium on the boy at the open piano, lit doorway beyond
- Lighting
- Cold blue night, warm off-screen flame spill
- Mood
- Approaching horror
LIVING ROOM
ambush terrorPeter finds Steve's charred, headless corpse before the fire while Annie, huddled in the ceiling corner with bloody piano wire, suddenly bursts screaming out of the dark after him.
- Characters
- PETER; ANNIE
- Props
- charred headless corpse; Steve's wedding ring; piano wire; fireplace embers
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Charred corpse prosthetic; Annie ceiling-perched and lunging
- Notes
- Steve's burned body confirmed by his wedding ring. A red-cloaked man stands in the closet. Annie chases Peter.
- Camera
- Wide, boy foreground, mother lunging from the ceiling corner
- Lighting
- Low ember-orange and cold blue dark
- Mood
- Ambush terror
ATTIC
trappedPeter locks the attic hatch as a mad pounding hammers up from beneath the floor.
- Characters
- PETER
- Props
- attic hatch
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- High angle down on the boy over the locked hatch
- Lighting
- Very low single light source in the dark attic
- Mood
- Trapped
HALLWAY
demonic frenzyUpside down and straddling the ceiling, Annie bashes her own forehead against the attic hatch like a maddened bull.
- Characters
- ANNIE
- Props
- attic hatch
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Annie inverted on the ceiling, head-banging the hatch
- Notes
- None
- Camera
- Low angle up at the inverted mother on the ceiling
- Lighting
- Cold low blue night
- Mood
- Demonic frenzy
ATTIC
escape into the voidAmong black candles and his own X'd-out photo, Peter turns to see the floating Annie saw through her own neck with piano wire, then a smiling red-cloaked man, and hurls himself through the window.
- Characters
- PETER; ANNIE; MIDDLE-AGED BLONDE MAN
- Props
- black candles; photograph of Peter with eyes X'd out; piano wire; window
- Wardrobe
- The blonde man dressed in a red cloak; Two older women crouched
- VFX/Stunts
- Annie self-decapitation with piano wire; Peter jumping through the attic window (glass-break stunt)
- Notes
- Annie decapitates herself; the cult watches. Peter jumps out the window to escape.
- Camera
- Wide, mother floating center, cultists in the dark, boy breaking the window
- Lighting
- Black attic lit only by ringed candle flames
- Mood
- Escape into the void
GRAHAM HOUSE
surrender to possessionFace-down in the snow, Peter is entered by the streak of light, rises hollow-eyed, clicks his tongue, and walks toward the candlelit treehouse where Annie's headless body has ascended.
- Characters
- PETER; ANNIE
- Props
- treehouse candlelight; Max's dead carcass; whippoorwill birdcage
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- Window-fall landing; Streak of light entering Peter; Headless floating Annie / shadow
- Notes
- Paimon transfers from Annie into Peter's body. Peter takes on Charlie's trance and tongue-click. Max found dead. The caged whippoorwill recalls the funeral bird.
- Camera
- Wide, boy rising in the snow, glowing treehouse beyond
- Lighting
- Cold night, warm treehouse candle-glow
- Mood
- Surrender to possession
TREEHOUSE
coronationRed-cloaked worshippers bow to a wooden manikin crowned with Charlie's rotting decapitated head as Joan crowns Peter and proclaims him Paimon, King of Hell, the headless corpses of his family kneeling before him.
- Characters
- PETER; JOAN
- Props
- black candles; 6-foot wooden manikin; Charlie's decapitated head; silver crown; wooden scepter; Queen Leigh portrait; red cloaks
- Wardrobe
- Worshippers in red cloaks; Annie's mother's corpse in white silk; Annie's headless torso
- VFX/Stunts
- Charlie's head on the manikin; Headless corpses
- Notes
- The cult's purpose revealed: Charlie's body was Paimon's flawed first 'female' host, now corrected into Peter's male body. Joan names him Paimon and the worshippers hail him.
- Camera
- Wide ceremonial master, then push to the crowned boy
- Lighting
- Warm ringed black-candle light
- Mood
- Coronation
TREEHOUSE
doomed completionA final wide of the candlelit treehouse as the worshippers cry 'Hail!', then the image fades to a neutral wide of the house rendered uncannily as its own miniature replica.
- Characters
- JOAN
- Wardrobe
- Standard
- VFX/Stunts
- House composited to look like a miniature for the closing shot
- Notes
- Closing dollhouse motif bookends the opening; the real house dissolves into its miniature. Credits roll.
- Camera
- Wide on the treehouse dissolving to the miniaturized house
- Lighting
- Warm candle-glow resolving to flat model light
- Mood
- Doomed completion
Locations
graham house
The Graham family's rustic two-story craftsman home, isolated in a snowy landscape and identical to Annie's miniature replica. Contains the artist's workshop, foyer, kitchen, TV room, living room with fireplace, dining room, library, bathrooms, stairway and hallways, the parents' bedroom, Peter's and Charlie's bedrooms, Annie's mother's locked bedroom, and a fly-infested attic.
Set Requirements
- •Artist's workshop full of detailed miniatures/dollhouses, paints and tools
- •Master bedroom, Peter's bedroom, Charlie's bedroom (art-strewn)
- •Annie's mother's stripped bedroom with carved-triangle floorboards (lockable by key)
- •Dank attic with vaulted ceiling, single window, blood-painted Sigil of Paimon, hidden headless corpse and black candles
- •Living room with practical fireplace
- •Dining room with oval table for the seance
- •Foyer with stairway and piano (wires removable)
- •Library with textured-glass door
- •Practical fly/ant infestation that escalates over the film
- •Snow-covered exterior grounds and driveway with two family cars
Key Visual Moments
- S1The camera glides across meticulous handmade dollhouses until a miniature teenage bedroom dissolves into the real room where Peter sleeps, the model and the world becoming indistinguishable.
- S2A wide reveals the snow-blanketed house identical to the miniature, the camera booming down past a looming treehouse to find Annie hollowed out in the parked car.
- S6The family enters a dark, seemingly vacant house to the sound of scurrying feet, and Steve notices mysterious dried footprints across the foyer.
- S7Annie paints a doctor figurine into a miniature hospice tableau of her dying mother while Steve quietly sets a pill beside her, which she downs without a word.
- S8After tender goodnights, the loaded tension between Annie and Peter lingers, and once she's gone Peter climbs out to lock his door.
- S9Among Charlie's handmade manikins, Annie spots a word like 'Satony' carved into the wall behind the bed as Charlie asks who will take care of her when Annie dies.
- S10Annie flicks off the light and freezes as her dead mother stands smiling motionless in a dark corner, vanishing the instant the light snaps back on.
- S11Annie nearly tells Steve she scared herself in the workshop, then swallows it and turns off the lamp into a held, lingering kiss.
- S16Annie paints a tiny laptop displaying 'Discernment of Presumed Apparitions' inside her miniature, art and obsession folding into one another.
- S17Annie freezes in the doorway of her mother's stripped room, eyeing a large triangle violently carved into the floorboards.
- S18Annie interrogates the family about who opened the grandmother's room, and Peter coldly insists she'll never find him in there.
- S19Steve locks the grandmother's door by key as a cemetery call about a 'desecrated' grave forces him to lie, and Annie pulls on a coat to flee the house.
- S23A depleted Annie crests the stairs just as Peter's door eases quietly shut in the foreground.
- S24Peter scrolls Bridget's Facebook photos behind a 'Popular Career Interests' tab, then takes a pipe hit at the window as a party invite text lands.
- S25A wide of the house with an anonymous shoulder in the foreground as pot smoke and a cough drift from Peter's window.
- S26A sudden glint of light sweeps Charlie's room; her clicking stops and she rises to stare fixedly out the snowy window at something unseen.
- S27Annie reads an email from the Asher Gallery asking for progress photos and is suddenly overwhelmed by the looming deadline.
- S29Distracted and anxious at her miniatures, Annie negotiates Peter's party request and orders him to take his sister along.
- S30Peter finds Charlie's room empty and calls her name into the silent hall.
- S31Peter reports Charlie isn't in the house and a frustrated Annie throws down her paintbrush insisting she must be.
- S33Annie stamps snow off her boots and forces a reluctant Charlie to go to the party with Peter, whose welcoming nod hides cold, uninviting eyes.
- S42Annie plants a ghostly figurine of her mother looming outside the open master-bedroom door of the dollhouse where she and Steve sleep.
- S47The car idles into the driveway with its door-alarm dinging; Peter steps out as if in a dream and walks stiffly into the house.
- S48Peter stalks woodenly past his sleeping parents and climbs into bed, leaving his door open.
- S49Peter lies wide-eyed as Annie's cheerful goodbye outside dissolves into a shrill, inhuman scream when she discovers the body.
- S51A storm rages as Annie wails 'I just wanna die' through a cracked bedroom door while Peter stands paralyzed on the stairs, listening.
- S53At the wake, everything glossed as if seen through grief-fogged glass, Steve absently accepts condolences in a daze.
- S54Annie lies facing the wall, her back to us, absent from her own daughter's wake.
- S55Peter hides in the library, watching the wake through textured glass with an almost deranged look, until a man stumbles in on him.
- S56Peter locks himself in the bathroom and turns on the sink to mask his panic with white noise.
- S57The last mourners filter out and Steve stands lost in the middle of the empty room.
- S58Steve knocks gently on the locked bathroom door, the running sink faint behind it, and gets no answer.
- S59On the tub's edge, Peter replays Annie's loving voicemail from the night Charlie died, a wound he keeps reopening.
- S60Steve stops at the bedroom door to find Annie gone, sheets dragged halfway off the mattress.
- S61Steve flips through Charlie's drawing pad, past severed-animal-head sketches to the crowned pigeon head, then a blank page, and the floodgates open.
- S62Framed by the doorway, Peter walks past Charlie's empty snowlit room, determinedly refusing to look in.
- S63Unable to sleep, Peter stares out at the looming treehouse, then gathers his blanket and pillow at 1:32 AM and leaves the room.
- S64In parka and Elmer Fudd hat, Peter notes Charlie's fly-buzzing shoebox at the tree's base before scaling the treehouse.
- S67Annie goes pale pulling a 'Calling All Skeptics!' seance brochure from the mail, glancing around as if suddenly being watched.
- S68Numb and exhausted at the hospice miniature, Annie hears the front door unlock and looks toward the noise.
- S69Steve calls for Annie as Max bounds up to greet him, tail wagging.
- S70Hearing Steve climb the stairs, Annie silently eases the workshop door shut to avoid him.
- S71Steve eases the door open to find Annie 'working' with headphones on, and smiles sadly before leaving her alone.
- S72Steve quietly dumps the seance brochure in the trash as Annie crosses the doorway unseen behind him.
- S73Frozen in the parked car so Peter won't see her, Annie watches her son gather his nerve at the front door before she starts the ignition.
- S75Annie lumbers in and pulls off her snow boots in the dark foyer.
- S76Bathed in muted TV glow, Steve wakes to ask where Annie was and she flatly repeats her movie lie before going to bed.
- S77Annie recoils from Steve's touch and rises with a blanket to sleep elsewhere, intimacy frozen solid.
- S79A clicking like Charlie's tongue startles Peter awake; he fixes on a hoodie that for an instant looks like a standing figure.
- S80As Annie scratches 'Satony' into the miniature wall, a paint bottle tips over on its own near her hand without her touching it.
- S87Voice cracked from his bleacher panic attack, Peter brushes past a carrot-chopping Steve and hurries upstairs.
- S88Steve gently offers Peter someone to talk to, but the boy deflects every question back, unable to confront his grief, then chills over.
- S89Steve discovers Annie has sculpted a miniature of the accident - Charlie's decapitated head and Peter in the car - and erupts, calling it cruel and useless.
- S90Provoked across the dinner table, Annie explodes at Peter that he can't take responsibility, and he counters with the devastating question of why his mother made Charlie go.
- S91Steve insists they have no control over anything, the ceiling could collapse and who would they blame, as Annie spirals into self-blame for sending Charlie out.
- S92Peter sobs that he should be dead because at least Charlie could make things, and a weeping Steve holds his head, both apologizing.
- S93Back to us, Annie whispers 'I'm sorry' and her shoulders begin to heave with sobs as Peter's muffled weeping bleeds through the walls.
- S94Gaunt and lethargic, Annie stares at her unfinished miniatures beneath a Post-It commanding 'KEEP WORKING!'
- S98A wide of the moonlit house looks uncannily like one of Annie's miniatures, all lights dark save a single glowing window.
- S99Steve sleeps as Annie whispers intensely behind the lit bathroom door, asking 'Can it be anything? Like her clothes?'
- S100Annie leans over the sleeping Peter, strangely hopeful, begging forgiveness before rousing him for something she's 'figured out.'
- S101Annie nudges Steve awake to join 'something together,' with Peter waiting nervously in the unlit hallway.
- S102Annie leads the wary pair down the dark hall toward the unlit dining room, Peter whispering 'Dad?'
- S103At the candlelit table Annie falls into a trance and speaks in Charlie's voice, crying out blindly 'Why are you scaring me?!' until Steve hurls water in her face.
- S104Outside, a shaking Steve says he's terrified of Annie and demands they see Dr. Stetson, as Peter watches from a window.
- S105In icy-blue moonlight Annie lies awake beside a sleeping Steve, too anxious to rest.
- S106Annie follows a trail of black ants from the window straight toward Peter's open bedroom door.
- S107Ants swarm Peter's head before the dream shifts and Annie confesses she tried to miscarry him, both suddenly drenched in paint thinner as an offscreen fire ignites.
- S108Annie wakes with a start to a fly on her face and Max barking wildly, finding Steve's side of the bed and his pillow gone.
- S109Lights on, Peter sits traumatized on his bed's edge in a wide high-angle composition matched eerily to the next cut.
- S112Pushed past breaking by the gallery's voicemail, Annie smashes every miniature with a hammer, sparing only the pristine Graham house replica.
- S113Steve and Peter enter to a foul smell and Steve swats a fly, wondering aloud if something died in the house.
- S114Steve calls in Dr. Stetson, who quietly competency-questions Annie amid buzzing flies while she seethes that her husband summoned a peer to investigate her.
- S115Examining the spared Graham house replica, Steve and Annie find a headless Peter figurine and a bloodied Annie figurine kneeling in the attic - additions neither made.
- S116Among the wreckage Steve spots the altered Graham house replica and bitterly chuckles, 'I was wondering when Peter would get switched with Charlie.'
- S117Drained and resentful, Steve downs three sleeping pills on the couch, muttering that he's always the one holding it together.
- S118From the dark workshop Annie hears a pencil furiously scratching paper down the hall as flies cluster around the attic door.
- S119In the empty room, Charlie's drawing pad fills itself with a materializing sketch and flips its own pages as Annie's eyes widen in horror.
- S120Charlie stands clicking in the dark corner, her head drooping and rolling off before two invisible hands seize Peter's chin and yank back as if to tear his head free.
- S121An invisible vacuuming force drags barking Max by his hind legs down the stairs and hurls him out the front door, which slams shut.
- S122Steve sleeps the drugged sleep of the dead on the couch as Annie's cries for Peter echo from upstairs.
- S123Released from the phantom hands, a terrified Peter accuses Annie of pulling on his head, and she swears she'd never hurt him while ordering him to tell no one.
- S124The drawing pad reveals page after page of crude sketches of Peter's face with X'd-out eyes, framed by furiously scribbled triangles.
- S125As Annie tries to burn Charlie's drawing pad, flames erupt on her own arm in perfect sync with the burning page, revealing she is bound to the book.
- S126A large moon over the house slam-cuts to a shrill morning sun, time lurching forward.
- S127Sleepless and anxious, Peter glances at the cracked workshop door, behind which Annie secretly watches to make sure he leaves.
- S132Digging through her mother's boxes, Annie finds welcome mats embroidered ANNIE, CHARLES and CHARLES-with-Paimon-sigil, the demonology tome INVOCATIONS, and a photo of her mother showered in coins beside a younger Joan.
- S134Annie pulls the rope on the fly-blackened attic hatch, releasing a horde of flies before she climbs up.
- S135Annie's flashlight finds a headless old woman's corpse in white silk and, painted in dry blood on the vaulted ceiling above, the Sigil of Paimon crawling with flies.
- S138The land-line rings into an empty kitchen as the school tries the Graham house.
- S143Laying the comatose Peter in bed, Annie tells Steve there's a decapitated old woman's body in the attic and urges him to go see for himself.
- S144While Steve climbs to the attic, Annie rushes to the fireplace and starts a fire.
- S145Annie lays out her mother's photos to prove Joan and the cult cursed them, but Steve, convinced she dug up the grave, refuses, so Annie hurls the drawing pad into the fire and Steve instantly ignites into a screaming ball of flame.
- S148A sharp clang of snapped piano wire reverberates as Peter, calling for his parents, finds the attic loud with flies and the rooms empty.
- S149Peter finds the piano lid open with wires snapped, then moves toward the living room lit by an off-screen flame.
- S150Peter finds Steve's charred, headless corpse before the fire while Annie, huddled in the ceiling corner with bloody piano wire, suddenly bursts screaming out of the dark after him.
- S151Peter locks the attic hatch as a mad pounding hammers up from beneath the floor.
- S152Upside down and straddling the ceiling, Annie bashes her own forehead against the attic hatch like a maddened bull.
- S153Among black candles and his own X'd-out photo, Peter turns to see the floating Annie saw through her own neck with piano wire, then a smiling red-cloaked man, and hurls himself through the window.
- S154Face-down in the snow, Peter is entered by the streak of light, rises hollow-eyed, clicks his tongue, and walks toward the candlelit treehouse where Annie's headless body has ascended.
treehouse
A large treehouse joined to a sturdy oak, hovering about fifteen feet above the ground behind the Graham house; Charlie's refuge and the site of the cult's final coronation, lit by candlelight.
Set Requirements
- •Climbable oak with handholds and floor-hatch
- •Interior practical to hold multiple actors plus a 6-foot crowned wooden manikin shrine
- •Black candle lining
- •Birdcage with live whippoorwill
- •Heaters for Annie's night-sleep scene
Key Visual Moments
- S3Steve finds Charlie asleep on the freezing treehouse floor, who lunges to snap shut a secret shoebox the instant she wakes.
- S20Charlie lays the fresh pigeon head into a shoebox already holding three other decomposing animal heads, flies buzzing in the cold.
- S65About to sleep, Peter senses someone and turns to find Annie bundled asleep in the corner, sending him fleeing and falling hard from the tree.
- S78An ominous wide finds Annie asleep in Charlie's treehouse between two heaters burning bright orange.
- S155Red-cloaked worshippers bow to a wooden manikin crowned with Charlie's rotting decapitated head as Joan crowns Peter and proclaims him Paimon, King of Hell, the headless corpses of his family kneeling before him.
- S156A final wide of the candlelit treehouse as the worshippers cry 'Hail!', then the image fades to a neutral wide of the house rendered uncannily as its own miniature replica.
funeral home
A funeral home chapel for Ellen Leigh's moderately attended funeral, with an open casket, blown-up photo of the deceased, altar and rows of chairs.
Set Requirements
- •Open casket with corpse prosthetic wearing the sigil necklace
- •Rafters and ceiling perch for a trained whippoorwill
- •Altar and chairs
Key Visual Moments
- S4A whippoorwill flaps out of the rafters and fixes its gaze on Annie mid-eulogy, while below an old woman covertly streaks oil across the corpse's lips.
family car
The Graham family cars (a green one and a blue one), used for funeral drives, the fatal highway trip, Annie's secret outings, and the hospital return. The green car is the 'accident' car, later permanently removed.
Set Requirements
- •Process/insert rig for high-speed night driving
- •Rear-view and side-view mirror inserts
- •Back seat for headless-torso prop
- •Two distinct cars (green and blue) for continuity
Key Visual Moments
- S5Driving past a gathering of deer, Annie confesses the funeral-home bird felt like her mother while Charlie tenses and clicks her tongue over a chocolate bar.
- S21Annie idles into a Catholic-school lot, kills the engine, and braces herself in silence before facing the grief group.
- S35Peter's eyes narrow resentfully at clicking Charlie in the mirror as the car passes a telephone pole carved with a small hidden sigil.
- S45A distraught Peter shoves a red-faced, suffocating Charlie into the back seat and bolts for the driver's side.
- S46As Peter swerves around a deer carcass at 80 mph, Charlie's head, thrust out the window for air, collides with a telephone pole and is ripped clean off.
- S97Stopped at a red light, Annie hears tongue-clicking in the empty back seat and turns, white-faced, to nothing.
- S139Eyes crazed, Annie waits in her parked car watching the house, willing Steve to come home as she clutches her phone.
- S141Driving home with a bandaged, black-eyed Peter asleep in back, Steve stomps a red light and breaks down crying behind the wheel.
- S142Annie's relief curdles to panic as Steve pulls an unconscious, bandaged Peter from the car and she rushes over clutching her mother's photo album.
high school
Peter's and Charlie's high school - classrooms (special-needs and English/algebra), hallways, the schoolyard, soccer field with bleachers, and the fenced exterior beside a busy road.
Set Requirements
- •Classroom with breakaway window for pigeon strike
- •Chalkboards for thematic lesson text
- •Desk rigged for face-slamming gag
- •Bleachers / soccer field
- •Exterior fence facing a road with traffic
Key Visual Moments
- S12A pigeon slams into the classroom window and snaps its neck, and amid the children's excitement Charlie's eyes coldly fix on the scissors on the teacher's desk.
- S13Under a chalkboard reading 'Escaping Fate,' Mr. Davies argues that the oracle left Heracles no choice, while Peter, oblivious, stares longingly at Bridget.
- S14Charlie calmly snips off the dead pigeon's head with the stolen scissors, pockets it, then locks eyes with a sentimental old woman watching from beyond the fence.
- S66The teacher's voice warps as if underwater while Peter flashes to the rear-view mirror and Charlie's blurred, headless body just out of frame.
- S81Three giggling stoners intercept Peter in the hall, Brendan miming a joint to invite him on a 'walk.'
- S82Under the bleachers, a reluctant hit triggers Peter into a panic attack echoing Charlie's death - 'My tongue is getting bigger' - as the oblivious stoners laugh.
- S110A glint of light flashes to the window where Peter's own reflection stares back, its eyes hardening bitterly against him.
- S131Across a busy road only Peter can perceive, Joan screams the invocation 'SATONY, DEGONY, EPARIGON!' and 'GET OUT, PETER!' like a lunatic.
- S133A flash of light streaks down the hall and dies at Peter's classroom, where Mr. Davies smiles expectantly through the door's window.
- S136An unseen force forces Peter's arm up and smashes his face repeatedly into the desk, breaking his nose in a spray of blood as the class screams.
steve's office
Steve's large, sparsely decorated psychiatrist's office with a leather chair and computer.
Set Requirements
- •Leather chairs
- •Computer with browser inserts
- •Office phone with caller ID
Key Visual Moments
- S15Steve absorbs an agitated patient's circular despair with superhuman, stifled patience in his sparse leather-chaired office.
- S111As Steve drafts a worried email about Annie, Peter calls in near-hysterics: 'Something's at the school. It followed me here!'
- S137Haggard and nursing scotch, Steve lets Annie's call and then the school's call go unanswered as the caller ID reveals Peter's high school.
- S140Steve finally answers the office phone and snaps alert: 'What happened? Which hospital?'
catholic school gymnasium
A Catholic high-school gymnasium hosting the 'Losing A Loved One' grief-recovery support group, with a circle of chairs and an easel sign; also its parking lot.
Set Requirements
- •Circle of ~20 folding chairs
- •Easel signage
- •Adjoining parking lot for the Joan headlight meeting
Key Visual Moments
- S22Forced to speak in the circle of chairs, Annie unspools her family's history of suicide and mental illness, ending on the haunting word 'blamed.'
- S74About to leave the grief-group lot, Annie is flagged into her headlights by a merry older woman, Joan, who reveals her son and grandson drowned.
highway
A lonely rural highway under a full moon, lined with telephone poles (one carved with a hidden sigil), site of Charlie's decapitation and her roadside severed head.
Set Requirements
- •Telephone pole rigged for the decapitation collision
- •Deer-carcass road dressing
- •Severed-head prop with practical ants
Key Visual Moments
- S34A full moon glows pale-blue over a lonely highway as the green family car flashes past.
- S50Charlie's severed head rests roadside, nose smashed, one eye milky, completely blanketed in crawling ants.
party house
A large modern suburban house hosting a teenage party - kitchen, living room, and a back 'other room' with a bong; Aaron's house.
Set Requirements
- •Kitchen with oven and chopping station (walnuts/chocolate cake)
- •Living room couch
- •Back bedroom for smoking
- •Party-crowd extras and practical music
Key Visual Moments
- S36At the foot of a bustling party house, a suddenly nervous Charlie slows to a stop, begging to wait outside.
- S37An extreme close-up of walnuts being brutalized on a chopping board cuts to Peter abandoning Charlie by promising the kitchen's chocolate cake.
- S38Bridget announces Peter has weed to two boys watching videos, and Peter immediately deflates at being outed.
- S39Shy and magnetized to the chocolate cake, Charlie accepts a slice studded with visible nuts without meeting the girl's eyes.
- S40Peter packs a bong as Annie's call goes ignored into his pocket, a missed-voicemail light beginning to blink.
- S41Lips smeared with chocolate, Charlie swallows again and again, looking faintly concerned as she draws herself a cup of water.
- S43Cheeks pink and inflamed, Charlie keeps assembling her manikin on the couch and waves off a concerned boy as she visibly worsens.
- S44Mid-bong-hit, Peter turns to a terrified Charlie who chokes out that her tongue is getting bigger.
cemetery
An overcast cemetery where Charlie's coffin is lowered into the grave.
Set Requirements
- •Open grave rigged for a camera move tracking down into the soil
- •Coffin and earthworm/dirt detail
Key Visual Moments
- S52As Charlie's coffin sinks into the earth, the camera follows it down through dirt and earthworms until everything is swallowed in black.
joan's apartment building
A large red-brick apartment building; Joan lives on the third floor at apartment 316, fronted by a handmade 'JOANIE' welcome mat.
Set Requirements
- •Elevator and well-lit third-floor hallway
- •Apartment door 316 with embroidered welcome mat
Key Visual Moments
- S84Annie knocks at apartment 316, looking down at a handmade 'JOANIE' welcome mat, before Joan opens the door delighted.
- S128Frighteningly determined in her nightgown and coat, Annie hammers on Joan's unanswered door.
- S130Annie looks down at the 'JOANIE' welcome mat and a realization hits, sending her racing back to the elevator.
joan's apartment
Joan's apartment, at first cheerfully decorated in bright homey colors, later revealed draped in Paimon sigils with a carved-triangle ritual table, athame, and the severed-head diorama.
Set Requirements
- •Bright homey dressing that converts to occult dressing (sigil drapes, blacked-out window)
- •Kitchen table with carved triangle and ritual props
- •Severed-head diorama build
Key Visual Moments
- S85In a cheerfully bright apartment, Annie notes the welcome mat resembles her mother's embroidery as Joan pours tea.
- S86Over tea, Annie and Joan trade the grisly details of their dead - Charlie's headless tarry body, Joan's fish-eaten son - finding morbid comfort, as Annie pulls a black herb from her mouth without noticing.
- S96Joan blacks out the window, lights a black candle, and guides Annie's hand onto an upturned glass to summon 'Louie' in the dark.
- S129The camera pulls back from the door to reveal Joan's apartment now draped in Paimon sigils, with a photo of Peter, a ritual dagger, and the finished severed-head diorama crowned by a raven's head.
art supply store
An art/miniature supply store with aisles of building materials and a chalk section, where Annie runs into a transformed Joan.
Set Requirements
- •Shopping carts and stocked craft/miniature aisles
Key Visual Moments
- S95Annie runs into a beaming, transformed Joan in the chalk aisle, who confides that a spiritual medium conjured her dead grandson.
woods
The vast snowy wooded area behind the Graham house, where Charlie is lured in a trance and a torchlit ritual body is glimpsed; later the site of the cult's distant drum circle.
Set Requirements
- •Snow-covered woodland
- •Ring of practical burning torches
- •White-silk ritual body rigged to a pole
- •Footprint trail in snow
- •High-angle/bird's-eye camera access
Key Visual Moments
- S28Coatless and trance-like, Charlie slogs through snow following a fresh trail of mysterious footprints, a fire crackling somewhere ahead.
- S32In the distance Charlie sees a ring of burning torches around an inanimate white-robed body tied to a pole, as Annie arrives oblivious and drags her home.
- S146Snow falls over the woods as faint, war-drum-like percussion thumps steadily from an unseen drum circle.
city street
An urban street Annie walks searching for Joan's address.
Set Requirements
- •Urban storefront/residential block leading to the apartment building
Key Visual Moments
- S83Annie hunts an address scrawled on the back of Joan's phone-number paper, arriving at a large red-brick apartment building.
Cast
ANNIE
A bereaved woman of 45, beautiful in a worn way and emotionally exhausted. A miniaturist artist preparing for a gallery show; wears a delicate necklace bearing the sigil of Paimon.
A grief-stricken artist estranged from her late occultist mother is manipulated into a seance that opens her family to the demon Paimon, and after her work, husband, and sanity unravel she becomes the cult's possessed instrument, ultimately decapitating herself.
STEVE
Annie's husband, 47, tall, broad-shouldered and formal; a working psychiatrist who serves as the family's steady, rational anchor.
The family's grounded skeptic who keeps everyone together through grief, dismisses the supernatural until it's too late, and is incinerated when Annie burns the cursed drawing pad.
PETER
The Grahams' handsome, skinny 17-year-old son; a detached, pot-smoking high-schooler with a crush on Bridget who is wracked by guilt after his sister's death.
A guilt-ridden teenager whose careless abandonment of his sister sets the tragedy in motion, who is then hunted by the cult and ultimately emptied out to become the demon Paimon's perfected male host.
CHARLIE
A plump, androgynous 14-year-old girl, a withdrawn young artist who builds manikins from found objects, has a tongue-clicking tic and a severe nut allergy. Her grandmother wanted her to be a boy.
The grandmother's chosen vessel who collects severed heads and is being drawn toward the cult, until a freak decapitation kills her, after which she persists as a haunting presence and as the demon's flawed first host.
JOAN
An older woman (late 60s), warm and merry on the surface, who claims her son and grandson drowned; secretly a longtime Paimon cultist and friend of Annie's mother.
Posing as a fellow griever, she lures Annie into the seance and the cult, then presides over the climactic ceremony that crowns Peter as Paimon.
ELLEN
Annie's deceased 75-year-old mother, Ellen Leigh ('Queen Leigh'). An intensely secretive, manipulative woman with D.I.D.; the matriarch of the Paimon cult who appears as an apparition.
Though dead before the story begins, her lifelong devotion to Paimon and manipulation of her family is the engine of the curse; her exhumed, headless corpse becomes the household shrine.
BRIDGET
An attractive 17-year-old classmate of Peter's, sardonic and self-possessed; the object of his crush.
Peter's romantic fixation and the reason he abandons Charlie at the party, recurring as a witness to his later breakdown.
DR. STETSON
A pleasant, well-scrubbed man in his 50s; Steve's psychiatrist colleague (Bob) called in to assess Annie.
Brought in to evaluate Annie's sanity, he conducts a brief competency assessment and quietly declines to intervene further.
MR. DAVIES
Peter's English teacher, 30s, leading discussions on Greek tragedy and inevitability.
A recurring classroom presence whose lessons on fate and lack of agency thematically frame Peter's doom.
BRENDAN
Peter's stoner friend who texts him party invites and shares weed under the bleachers.
A casual high-school friend who reassures Peter through his panic attack, oblivious to its real cause.
AARON
A preppy, suspicious 17-year-old; host of the high-school party.
The party host who grudgingly tolerates Peter's appearance.
MIDDLE-AGED BLONDE MAN
A smiling middle-aged blonde man who stares sentimentally at Charlie at the funeral; later appears in a red cloak among the cultists.
A cult member who watches the family from the funeral onward and presides, red-cloaked, over the final ritual.
LARGE WOMAN
A woman in her 60s (Judy) who delivers Ellen Leigh's eulogy.
A mourner who memorializes Ellen at the funeral.
TEACHER
The warm 40s teacher of Charlie's special-needs class, and (a teacher) of Peter's later classroom.
A gentle classroom authority whose well-meaning interference disturbs Charlie.
PATIENT
An extremely agitated, depressed female patient in her 40s in Steve's office.
A single-scene therapy patient establishing Steve's profession.
LEADER
The group leader of the grief-recovery support group.
Facilitates the support group where Annie first speaks publicly about her loss.
YOUNG MAN
A young man who translates the grieving Mexican woman's Spanish for the support group.
Interpreter at the grief group.
MEXICAN WOMAN
A middle-aged woman who speaks through tears in Spanish at the support group about her late husband.
A grieving group member whose testimony agitates Annie.
MAN
A man in his 40s who steps into the family library during the wake and offers Peter condolences.
A mourner who briefly encounters Peter at the wake.
OLDER WOMAN
An older woman in her 60s who sits beyond the schoolyard fence gazing sentimentally at Charlie.
A watching cult presence observing Charlie at school.
CONCERNED BOY
A boy of about 16 at the party who, mistaking Charlie for a boy, offers her water as she sickens.
A bystander who notices Charlie's distress at the party.
HISPANIC BOY
A Hispanic teenage boy in the party's back room watching videos and smoking.
A party guest who jokes about Peter's sister.
BLONDE BOY
A blonde teenage boy in the party's back room watching videos.
A party guest in the smoking room.
SMART-ASS STUDENT
A wisecracking student (Sam) in Peter's English class who keeps joking about Oedipus.
Comic-relief classmate during the Greek-tragedy lesson.
STUDENT #2
A student in Peter's English class who half-heartedly answers Mr. Davies.
Classroom participant in the fate discussion.
STUDENT #3
A thoughtful student in Peter's class who argues the tragedy lies in having no hope.
Classmate who articulates the play's fatalism.
STONER #2
One of Peter's stoner friends under the bleachers who notices his panic attack.
A friend present during Peter's bleacher panic episode.
STONER #3
Another of Peter's stoner friends under the bleachers.
A friend present during Peter's bleacher panic episode.
Production Design · Props
sigil necklace (Sigil of Paimon)
HeroWorn by Annie, Ellen's corpse, and (in photos) Joan and Ellen; the central occult emblem. Multiples needed.
Graham house miniature replica
HeroHero miniature; supernaturally altered (Peter/Charlie figurine swap, bloodied attic Annie). Survives the workshop destruction. Needs close-up detail and changeable figurines.
Charlie's drawing pad
HeroKey plot object; self-drawing pages (Peter with X'd eyes), the cursed 'link' object burned in the climax. Multiples for fire and rigged self-drawing gags.
shoebox of severed animal heads
HeroContains pigeon, rat, rabbit and squirrel heads in decay; later assembled into the cult diorama. Practical flies.
scissors
HeroStolen from the teacher's desk; used by Charlie to behead the dead pigeon.
chocolate / nut-laden cake and bars
HeroCharlie's nut allergy device; ECU of walnuts being chopped, the cake slice that triggers anaphylaxis.
black candle
HeroJoan's seance candle that self-relights; black candles ring the climactic attic and treehouse rituals.
upturned drinking glass
HeroSeance planchette that slides on its own; used at Joan's and at the Graham dining table.
INVOCATIONS book (Paimon grimoire)
HeroDemonology tome with the King Paimon etching, possession rules, and Ellen's handwritten apology note.
embroidered welcome mats
HeroJOANIE mat; ANNIE, CHARLES and CHARLES-with-sigil mats in Mom's boxes - the craft that links Joan to Annie's mother.
telephone pole with carved sigil
HeroThe pole that decapitates Charlie, pre-marked with a Paimon sigil.
Charlie's severed head
HeroDecapitated-head prosthetic; ant-covered roadside, later crowning the treehouse manikin in advanced decay.
piano wire
HeroStripped from the foyer piano; Annie's self-decapitation weapon.
pills / prescription bottles
Recurring medication motif; Steve's sleeping pills (three downed) explain his deep sleep during the climax.
Charlie's handmade manikins
Found-object figures Charlie builds; one becomes the diorama torso.
cell phone / voicemail
Tracks Peter's guilt (Annie's saved BBQ voicemail) and the unanswered crisis calls.
public seance brochure
'Calling All Skeptics!' flyer for medium Suzanne Marlowe; Steve throws it away.
flies and ants
HeroEscalating practical insect infestation signaling the hidden attic corpse and the supernatural decay; ants in the head shot and Annie's nightmare.
athame (ritual dagger) and diorama
HeroJoan's ritual dagger, herbs, and the finished severed-head diorama crowned with a raven head.
crown and wooden scepter
HeroCrowned-figure iconography from the pigeon drawing pays off in the treehouse manikin's silver crown, scepter, and Peter's coronation.
red cloaks
HeroThe cult's ceremonial robes; multiples for the worshippers and the blonde man.
lighter fluid / paint thinner
Flammable accelerant tied to Annie's sleepwalking incident and the climactic burning.
guitar
Peter improvises a tune.
Memories photo albums
HeroAnnie's mother's albums revealing photos of Joan and the coin-showering ritual; Annie's proof of the cult.
Poster Concepts
The Maker Who Lost Control
“Some families pass down more than their faces.”
A worn, exhausted woman in her forties fills the frame from the chest up against pitch black, her face slack with grief. A delicate necklace bearing an ornate carved sigil rests at her throat, catching the only sharp light. Her eyes are unfocused, fixed past the viewer at something we cannot see in the dark corner over her shoulder. Lower third reserved for title.
The Boy They Hollowed Out
“Something is wearing him now.”
A skinny seventeen-year-old boy stands centered against a dim bedroom, photographed dead-on, his nose freshly bandaged and both eyes ringed black and blue. His mouth is parted mid-breath; his expression is empty, recently emptied. A thin horizontal streak of pale light cuts across his eyes like something passing through him. Negative headroom above for the title.
Grandmother in the Corner
“She never really left the house.”
The frame is a dark domestic room shot wide. In the far back corner, small and barely lit, stands the motionless figure of an old woman in a bathrobe, smiling faintly, half-dissolved into shadow. The foreground is empty floor, drawing the eye slowly back to her. The viewer realizes she is staring straight out. Title floats in the empty foreground.
The Sigil Carved In
“Marked before you were born.”
A tight overhead shot of bare wooden floorboards, raw and scratched, with a large triangle violently carved into them, the gouges fresh and splintered. A few black ants crawl along the cut lines. The wood grain reads like skin. Everything else is darkness. Title sits below the carving.
The House That Was Always a Model
“You think you're living it. You're being arranged.”
A handmade miniature of a craftsman house sits on a dark workbench, lit by a single lamp, while behind and around it the real, identical house looms blurred and full-scale, so the eye cannot tell which is the model. Tiny figurines are visible in the miniature's lit windows. Title runs along the workbench edge.
Crown for a Severed Thing
“They were always building toward a king.”
Centered on black, a crude foil-and-silver crown rests atop something we slowly recognize as a decayed animal head, drawn in the raw style of a child's sketch bleeding into a real prosthetic. Black candle flames flank it low. The image hovers between drawing and rotting fact. Title beneath.
Headlights and the Pole
“The road home was set long ago.”
A lonely rural highway at night under a pale full moon, telephone poles receding into the dark. A sedan's headlights rake one pole in the near distance; a deer carcass lies on the shoulder. Nothing has happened yet, but everything is in place. Composition leaves the lower sky open for title.
The Glass Begins to Move
“Open the door and something always walks in.”
A directly overhead shot of a dark dining table ringed by three seated figures, hands converging on a single upturned drinking glass at the center. One black candle burns. The figures' faces are lost; only the hands, the glass, and a child's drawing pad on the wood are clear. The pool of candlelight is an island in black. Title set into the surrounding dark.
Flies on the Hatch
“Whatever died up there is awake.”
A low upward angle of a darkened upstairs hallway ceiling and a closed attic hatch, its seams black and crawling with flies, a pull-rope hanging dead-still. A foul faint glow leaks from the hatch edges. The viewer stands below, where the family stood, not yet knowing what waits above. Title fills the dark lower hallway.
One Triangle, One Word
“It was decided before you arrived.”
A flat near-black field. Dead center, a single triangle rendered as if scratched into the surface by a fingernail, raw and uneven. Nothing else but the title, small, below it. The whole poster is restraint and one wrong shape.
The Family, Subtracted
“A family is only ever one removal away.”
Four small silhouetted figures stand in a row on a vast black field, family-portrait spacing. Three are intact; one is missing its head, a clean absence. No faces, no detail, just the gap where a head should be. Title set large in the empty black above the row.
Click
“You'll hear her before you believe it.”
Black field. A single small phonetic mark or tongue-click glyph sits high, almost invisible, suggesting a sound in an empty room. The title sits centered, isolated, with enormous breathing dark around it. The whole poster is the feeling of hearing a noise no one else hears.
Candlelight in the Tree
“The light in the trees was never for you.”
A wide night exterior of a snow-covered yard. High in a bare oak, a treehouse glows from within with warm candlelight, the only light in a freezing blue-black world. Faint figures may be inside. The house below is dark. The image is beautiful and deeply wrong. Title low in the snow-dark.
The House as a Specimen
“Look closely. Someone is arranging this.”
The Graham craftsman house shot dead-center and perfectly symmetrical against snow, every window dark but one, which glows. The framing is too clean, too composed, so the house looks like an object on display rather than a home. Cold flat light. The uncanny is in the symmetry. Title low and centered.
The Inheritance
“Everything they were is coming down to you.”
A single tall composition reading downward like a fall: at top, a faint smiling old woman dissolving from shadow; beneath her a worn grieving woman with a sigil at her throat; below, a hollow-eyed bandaged boy; and at the very bottom, half-buried in dark, a carved triangle and a scatter of black flies. Each figure bleeds into the next in candlelit gloom, a lineage descending into the symbol that owns them. Title across the lower third.